This fic was great, I loved it! I liked the suspence and the was the story was organized.

That was great! I'm glad that Veronica gave into her love for Logan and didn't try and stay with Duncan to make things work.

The last part was exciting, too. I'm glad it turned out to be happy!

i loved it. sometimes they seemed a little out of character, but other than that it was a great chapter. i know it says you've completed this story, but i would love to see where you could take this fic.

I loved it