Yummy...*dumps out drool bucket*

Great job! {drools like the fangirl she is over a mental picture of Vincent ramming the gun up Seph's entrance}

O.O
>.>

Heh, very nice gun play its aways fun to watch two powerful characters like this. Good job

Ooh! I read this on LJ! I'll have to look at more of your stories! (I still love the gun-kink).

this was really hot. never thought using a gun could make it more interesting. nicely written!

Oh God, gun sex? You must be better at kinky crap then me, because I would have NEVER thought of that. Trust me on this one though, it was hot. Fantabulous, my fellow writer, fantabulous indeed.

lol, such a wonderful secret to have! loved it. 'Twas nicely written! :)

*wipes up drool* wow, this was beyond sexy! seph begging in itself is extremely hot but that's beside the point lol.
i give it ten stars! :)

SB

I really enjoyed the story and how well you wrote it -very to the point but still with a lot of detail. Loved it. Also, since V x S is my favorite pairing, I too enjoyed Vincent having the upper hand in this fic. So, great job overall and I look forward to reading more from you. Cheers!

HA!! This was..well, this was definitely something. I agree, this is certainly rated M for a reason (thank God!).
First off, I liked the roles, as far as Vincent having been the one on top. That's a fairly rare occurance as far as post-everything goes. So i really liked that.
Then was the gun...or lord, the gun. i didn't know if I should think it was hot, or think it was totally ridiculous (not in a bad way, in the best way possible.) I settled for a combo, you know, finding it attractive but laughing as I read. :)
Loved that Vincent doesn't want to tell him the gun was loaded.
Those two are so weird...

Great story!