 ouran critic :P 2009-10-05 . chapter 1 umm. yeah like it but it is more based on kaoru not hikaru |
 Akirasan215 2009-09-20 . chapter 1wow i really actually liked this one fairly well great job by the way keep up the good work i love the twins... |
 PunkLover 2009-09-12 . chapter 1Gah. This is one of the best limons I've ever read. lmao.
Great job. I just love Hikaru and Kaoru.
You two did an awesome job. :D |
 Malfoy's Kitten 2009-08-28 . chapter 1WOW.
Wow. |
 MoriKyoyalover101 2009-08-05 . chapter 1haha i believe that you wanted a feedback from me on this fanfic? i'm not entirely sure, but i loved it anyway (: it was totally cute, sexy and real lol. definitally worth the favorite :]]
--MoriKyoyalover101 (Monique) |
 I'm Not Psychotic. I'm Gifted. 2009-08-03 . chapter 1Sorry, it must have slipped my mind to review!
This story was extremely well-written and was believable. You two are very talented writers. I will definitely be checking out your other stories.
~C |
 Nikki-hanyou 2009-08-03 . chapter 1I really like how you kept the characters in there own little personalities. I guess thats how I fav this story, making it into a lemon, but at the same time you kept the characters as they are. Perfecto I must say. |
 Kyashii 2009-08-03 . chapter 1GAH!! <3 <3 This was so smexy~~...^/^ I really like your "limons!" wai!! <3 <3 <3 <-way too fangirly right now |
 ItsxHikarixUn 2009-07-13 . chapter 1IT. WAS. AMAZING! :D |
 twinlover69lolawesomewriter 2009-07-04 . chapter 1in the beginning in the authors note, i thik u meant there was no condom for Hikaru, poor Kaoru, cuz they deffo lubed up. |
 Emilene.R 2009-06-25 . chapter 1That was hot. lol |
 SasoLOVE111 2009-06-24 . chapter 1woow
this was probably the best hikaruXharuhiXkaouru one-shot ever!
you did an AWESOME job, yeah |
 LC Rose 2009-06-11 . chapter 1That was really, really good. I most enjoyed it. ;-) |
 The Eejit Bean Sidhe 2009-03-31 . chapter 1The ending was cute ^^ Great story!! |
 Nahxbios 2009-03-21 . chapter 1Wow... that was, interesting, ive never read a fic with three people doing it at the same time... |