 Sador 2008-04-08 . chapter 1Great Story. I am not just saying that, I really enjoyed it. It was subtle, easy going, and flowed along rather well. At least you put your story up. I have quite a few stories written but don't have the guts to put them on the internet. The story was entertaining, in my opinion, if it counts for anything that is, and it seemed as if every line had a purpose and brought the story together. |