i almost want to see this assassin fried crispy for being so cocky. silly people underestimating how powerful she is.

update please continue great story and chapter

please update great chapter

great chapter please update

please update

please update your story great chapter

Great start of you story

Oh my, this seems to be getting better and better. I hope that Taranee is okay; who was that? And this Daniel guy...something about him... By the way, is this based off D&D? Now that I think about it, those bullette were featured inside the D&D Universe, so... Keep up the good work all the same XD

continue its so cool

Gosh. This next chapter was kind of a quick update, but anything to maintain your status as a "W.I.T.C.H." fanfic writer. The remaining four Guardians and Matt are showing their concern for Will on Candracar, and possibly the only way to get in touch with her is if Taranee and Halinor (the ex-Fire Guardian) use a Candracan technique known as the Communion. Meanwhile, Will is still stuck on Leementes with a boy she just met, Daniel, who says he's a Holic priest. That Sheng guy is out for Will's blood, so it looks like Will had better prepare herself for the dangers to come.

Another great GL. Can't wait to see what happens when the assissin make her move and hopw the battle goes for Will.

col. thats all i could come up with lol update soon

Yay for continuation of the story. Hope for more soon.

What a compelling chapter. Will is getting stronger on Leementes every day of her life, yet she doesn't have Austra or Kit to help her. Feeling all alone, she finds solice in a mysterious boy who says he is a priest of Holic. The boy could be hiding something from her, but she doesn't know that. Right now, she just wants to have some company. More drama awaits.

Aw man, I hope that Austra and Kit aren't dead, they were really cool :( That lake was pretty cool, what makes me think that we might see it again? I like your style of writing; what next for our heroine? ^_^ Will the girls get to her in time? Only time will tell ^^