O.M.G. can you make a bigger OMG! I kinda figured it would happen, but the phrasing was perfect! loved this story and i'm going to read the sequel now!

Well I'm sorry it wasn't Ianto in bed with Jack (or in bed with Jack and the Doctor) but I like this anyway. I'm glad you're doing a sequel.

Judy

Haha what a great ending! and I loved the "Doc. What's up"Glad you said that in that order" XD Can't wait for the sequel :D

You mean there's going to be a sequel? OHH! :D

Loved this little story...poor poor Jack though. :d First he loses Gray, and then Rose and the Doctor, and then Owen and Toshiko too? After all of that trouble to find the other Glove and bring Owen back to life, too. -Sigh
Still...it's kind of sad but beautiful that Jack, as the Face Of Boe, dies before the Doctor does and the Doctor was there with him. Though I'm still convinced it's identity theft. .-Cough- Erm. Anyways...

I loved how The Doctor was there for Jack in this story...specially the whole 'we won't fight it' thing. And that Jack's going to get The Doctor's mobile, haha. I can just imagine their conversations now...

ANYWAY.(I get side-tracked often, as you can see. Update soon! :D PM me when there's a sequel up?

I am SO glad it wasn't Jack's fault in the end not that it ever was, but you know what I mean. Even Jack couldn't think that any more. I'm really happy the Doc's gonna be there for him as well.

Heheh, I feel all warm inside now. Thank you for posting this; it badly deserves to be the truth in the episodes.

Epilogue sounds good! And a sequel. Go for it!

Yeh, that was nice (even if Jackk didn't get with Ianto at the end). I'm glad the Doctor was able to help Jack see that it wasn't his fault. But really, even if Jack had simply let go, he was just a child himself. How could anyone blame a child for loosing a child? But you are always your own worse critic. I look forward to more of this story.

Judy

yes it was a nice chapter, ty

That was a nice chapter, it was very sweet. Update soon!

Oh The Doc is going to take Jack there and prove to him that it was not his fault! Nice chapter.

The Doctor is exactly who Jack needs. Great chapter :D

Wait.

I spot a snag in all of this. And that is...

I HAVE TO WAIT!

That is so not good!*Hides in the corner of the TARDIS to watch the action sooner
Heheh. That's better.

Please continue soon!

ohh cliffhanger please update this is brilliantly amazing please update

I like your story
But I'm upset that it's ending soon
Anyway, good chapter, looking forward to more!

Well Done!

Aww its gonna be over this soon? They better be long and good chapters, can't wait. :P

I'll hate to see this end even if it's so sad.
While my heart aches for Jack and his pain I also feel so bad for Ianto and to some degree Gwen. He loves Jack so much and would love to be there for him, but Jack won't let him.

I had hopes for Martha but I guess it's up to the Doctor now.

Judy