Reviews for Fatally Flawed

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Lilwazzabug 2008-08-02 ch 1,	abuseWow...that was great!O_O I loved the Constantine-esque interpretation of Hell. I always thought that was an accurate depiction. Great story:D I think I actually would have preferred this finale to the real one:(
ayumidah 2008-06-15 ch 1,	abuse...wah. Dean! :( Sequel?
kogsy21 2008-05-27 ch 1,	abuseWow. Wow. Wow. This was just amazing. And heart breaking! I was pulled in by every word. You know how to weave things together so perfectly. I was in tears at the end. Very well-written. Great job!
M.Kena 2008-05-15 ch 1,	abuseGawd... that was SO SAD. sob Oh, so sad. Like to a punch to the gut, actually, when Sam came barging in... I would kill for another chapter. :D
Sanderspleen 2008-04-13 ch 1,	abuseHOLY CRAP! I took your forewarning, knowing that this would not be a happy ending and just went with it, but you put such a spin on the outcome and it was incredible! Taking the idea of the boys constantly sacrificing for each other and making it a never ending story for them...basically their own private hell you can say...was fantastic! The whole scene played out between Dean and Lillith was EXTREMELY intelligent. The banter between them, Dean still holding the charisma that is so him...I seriously can not imagine this done better. In a way of ending how we DON'T want it to, but done so well that you can't help but be in awe. Bravo! So well done!
Lilly B. 2008-04-09 ch 1,	abusegreat story...very intense! not saying that i'd want the season to end this way either, but it was a great idea...very origional take on what might happen. again, great job!
PADavis 2008-04-09 ch 1,	abuseMan oh man - you dream in technicolor don't you? Very creepy well written story. Thanks! Thanks as well for the recommendation of Bayre's What You Feel. I'll check on SNVille. Phoebe
Kira Reed 2008-04-09 ch 1, anon.	abusetears This was so emotional. A good one-shot to catch the tone of the show, I mean I wouldn't want it to go this way like you said...but wow, if Kripke did this or worse...guh! Don't want to think about it. This caught the emotion very well. Again you are a marvel with the discriptions and the way you capture the two brothers. It was like I was watching it more then reading. You do that a lot in your writings, feels like I am right there watching the two. hugs You should be very proud of this piece. You did an amazing job. wipes eyes
Scared of Pennies 2008-04-09 ch 1,	abuseOw clutches at heart That was so heartbreaking and heartwrenching and just...No! lol It can't end this way, oh I want to cry this is just so mean! lol Poor Dean, Poor Sam! Beautifully written and characterised and just...ow amazing job and if it ends this way Kripke better watch out!
darksupernatural 2008-04-08 ch 1,	abuseAmazing. Thanks for the read.
LovinJackson 2008-04-08 ch 1,	abuseThat idea is definately something that i havent come across in fanfic before and omg how freaking cruel it was. THAT had me riveted from start to finish, awesome writing, all the dialoge fantastic and you had me really praying that this DOESNT happen on the show coz ... well just no lol I dont think I could take that. That was a brilliant piece of work! Tara x0x
staceycj 2008-04-08 ch 1,	abuseWow!...nothing else to say...but definitely wow!
Witchfire 2008-04-08 ch 1, anon.	abuseGreat work, and keep it up!
timetowaste247 2008-04-08 ch 1,	abuseAwesome twist on the conclusion of Dean's deal.
Ditzyleo 2008-04-08 ch 1,	abuseGaw- that broke my heart to read. I could so see it playing out like this and your wonderful writing made it feel like i was watching the season final rather than reading a (hopefully- no offence!) AU ff! Wonderful- in a heart-aching way - stuff!

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