Reviews for A New Awakening

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Kapola Nuva 2008-09-01 ch 45,	abuseim sorry to see another great story left to never be continued. I feel thankful for the lack of the cliffhanger but sad for the end of this tale. I enjoyed the writing and the emotions brought alone with it. all i can say is thank you for the stories
Princess Asuna 2008-08-22 ch 45,	abuseOh hell no, how can you do this, i mean words cannot describe my disappointment knowing this story will never be finished! I have been reading this story for the last THREE days on the edge of my seat and loving every moment of every chapter! I really wanted to see Rohn get his come-up-ins for how he treated what he called mongrels (I really hated him and still do lol). All I can ask I suppose is that you think about continuing the Fic, or at the very least perhaps post something on the forums as to the effect of looking for a person to help and or finish this Fic, it is one I would very much like to see have some sort of an end to it other then to simply be cast aside because and I say this with no disrespect intended, you don't think you can do it by yourself, though again I mean no disrespect and hope you do not take offense, on the contrary I hope my words spark something in you to continue this work that you and your friend began, and that you will see it thought to the end be it good or bad.
DarkBlueHated 2008-04-30 ch 3,	abuseWow, that's strange to say the least.. XD Okay, there's some really bad grammar and spelling errors but that's fine. I think what got me was the really uncharacteristic speeches. On a lot of the dialog this chapter had most of them seem robotic especially when describing what happened before hand. Other than that, interesting take, probably the first Ranma turns fairy I've ever read. Not to say I haven't read other fanfics where Ranma gets something similar, but nothing that directly states he's a fairy. Interesting. Time for more.
DarkBlueHated 2008-04-30 ch 2,	abuseLet's see. First of all it felt slightly rushed. Though I can understand that since even I find myself wanting to get over the back drop of any story most of the time. It jumped from being stuck in girl form to getting Kuno away from them, uncharacteristically without martial arts, then finally Nabiki ACTUALLY giving part of the cut? Felt way too fast for one relatively short chapter. Second, the slight OOCness. Though it's an understandable reaction to the unexpected and, as of yet, unexplained changes that can easily make all characters involved a bit OOC. Other than that, you have my interest piqued and I do want to see where this fic goes.
RankoSaotome 2008-04-26 ch 1,	abuseI am deeply saddened to hear that Dani Yanega has passed away. May her beautiful spirit fly free, and watch over all those she loves and cares for, that when they join her, they can fly together. She will be missed, as I have been a fan of you both since I first read A New Awakening years ago. To see this once more thrilled me, but hearing of Dani's passing has left me feeling like an important part of the world has left. Much love goes out to those that miss her. Jerry, I feel that by continuing this fic, in her memory, you have done a wonderful thing for her. I very much believe that seeing you do so has her smiling in heaven. Thank you.
JWG 2008-04-19 ch 44,	abuseA pleasant, though roughly crafted yarn, with no end in sight. and now seemingly without a primary writer. Will there be more? -JW
firelordeg 2008-04-17 ch 44,	abusea truly wonderful story please update again a.s.a.l.a.
Wharpt 2008-04-16 ch 44,	abuseOK! We've reached the last of the chapters posted in the FFML archives. Now have you any new chapters to bring forth? Please?
James Axelrad 2008-04-16 ch 41,	abusea rather interesting fic.
firelordeg 2008-04-16 ch 41,	abusewow just wow this story is magnificent please keep up the fantastic writing please update again a.s.a.l.a. = as soon as life allows. I give my condolences to you for your pasted on friend as well as to the family
JJK9 2008-04-15 ch 36,	abuseWow this story keeps getting better and better. Just one question, have you written most of this out beforehand and are now posting it? Or are you writing extremely fast? Still it's nice to come back in a few day and have 20 new chapters.
jpuldk 2008-04-14 ch 36,	abuseI have read the story that u had made and cant wait fore the next chapters. I hope that u will contiue it.
Ookii Mamoru 2008-04-14 ch 31,	abuseO man, I was hopping to see a can of woppass broken open for once. :-) O well. OM
James Axelrad 2008-04-13 ch 31,	abusevery good story. lots of interesting things going on now. greatly interested in seeing more.
James Axelrad 2008-04-13 ch 27,	abuseits a rather interesting twist at the end. typos observed through out, and section breaks would ease reading.

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