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Lepa2793
2009-12-12 . chapter 6
It's so evil, dramatic, scary and weird and awesome all at the same time :D
Roy's so cute here :D So nice to Ed :D
And Hughes is so fatherly ^.^
He he, I liked the part where he got so mad he threw the coffee cup at a wall.
But...
Poor Ed xD
You're one evil twisted human being... But... So am I! :D
So that's a compliment!

I really hope you continue! ^.^
MizuYousei
2009-11-24 . chapter 6
this is good please up data. poor Ed, go hero Roy
Heather
2009-11-06 . chapter 4
you so stole that from Enzai, thats plagiarism... but i do like the main story, just write you're own stuff kk, you're a good writer... you just need to realize it.
6-Mya-6
2009-11-03 . chapter 6
This was really good!
I hope you update soon XD
Yukimura-chan
2009-10-25 . chapter 6
Entschuldigen mein schlechtes Deutsch ... aber .. hier ist es: Die schönste Geschichte, die ich seit langem gelesen! <3

Danish: Den smukkeste historie jeg længe har læst!

English: The most beautiful story I have long read!

Spanish: La historia más hermosa que he leído de largo!

Japanese: 私は長い間読んでいる最も美しい物語!

Yeah I just love it <3
jackie-marie
2009-09-27 . chapter 6
hurry and update please, I want to read more :)
bubbles52
2009-09-26 . chapter 6
more more more u must write as much as possible. U have an amazing imagination. Keep up the splended work.
HisokaYukiko
2009-09-15 . chapter 6
Oh, no! Poor Edward... this was so hard to read!
But I have to know what happens! please update soon.
Sivlerblood
2009-09-14 . chapter 6
Oh man ur good I'm in love with this I want to read more it's so good
ilovemiax
2009-09-14 . chapter 6
Aww! Poor ed! Update soon!
xXSMiZXx
2009-09-14 . chapter 6
HOMG. THAT WAS EPIC! I lvoe this story. It has EVEYTHING A crazed mental, medical, drama seaking, eveything lover, needs XD I just love evey little thing about this story!

Can't wait to see more!
Amethyst-eyed Koneko
2009-09-13 . chapter 6
*is outraged* PICTURES?!?! The sonofabitch took PICTURES?!? On top of making him to THAT?!?! Oh.My.God! I'm torn between wanting to cuddle and comfort Ed and ripping Ryans' throat out! grr! Since Roy has the comforting and cuddling part taken care of, that leaves me free to do some serious ripping and tearing! *grabs up a knife and starts stalking her prey* Oh Ryans! *she sing-songs* Come out, come out, wherever you are! *evil grin* *notices Ed got a low-rent lawyer, glares* Well just F my life! The system's trying to do to Ed what Ryans has already done! That sucks. :P Need moar fic nao! :)
XxForest-DragonxX
2009-09-13 . chapter 6
ryan needs to die! DIE DIE DIE BURN IN HELL! BURN HIM SLOWLY AND PAINFULLY ROY!
lelalemon
2009-09-13 . chapter 6
Poor Edo-kun. At least he has his Roy-toy.
Hyperthia
2009-09-13 . chapter 6
Awesome update!!
You have no idea how I have been anticipating this update!! Whe I saw that there was a new chapter, I was all, "YEAH!!"

Anyways, POOR ED! Could it get any worse for him?! My goodness. That bastard even took pictures of him :( That's child **! >:(
If Ryan's were real, I would hunt him down and do terrible things to him!

Good chapter
I can hardly wait for more :)
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