STORY IZ AWESOME. UPDATE. NOW.

gasp gasp~~ a... pol~? :D
hurhurhur~ lol
itasaku or narusaku either way is nice~ :)<33
haha a;lsdkfjlsdajfa
darnn i want sakura to fight showing sasuke that she can own ppl hehe xD
anywayss~ update soon ^^ lol

*sniff* im sorry RiRi-chan! u hav to be stuck down there with the psycho bitch still! T.T but hey! look at the bright side! im out. and ima try to convince Sakura-chan to let u out 2! u never kno it might work! ^_^ ^_~ XD neway I LUV THIS! ITS BEAUTIFUL! YAY! just u wait Tobi. i will hav my revenge on u! *lightning cracks in the background* neway dont worry bout the late update. even tho i finally udpated The Cherry Blossom in Pain i still need to update Second Chance so oh wellz. neway i luvded this and i hope u can udpate soon ^_^

~CGWG

p.s. i think this is the longest review iv ever writtin and i kno im just makin it longer with this XD

Not bad... not bad at all... The new story info keeps me going... Nice! ^ ^

Can't wait for the next chapter! ooh! And I love the new summary! Sounds good...

i love ur story's idea and it's a great read, but the chapters are way too short :{
even if it means releasing at slower rates, chapters should at least exceed 5 pages. it's hard to follow and remember ur storyline when all we're getting are little excerts.
also, try to remain a little more IC... they characters have more depth than the over-dramatic sterotypes ur playing with.

keep up the good work, i'd like to see this story 2 the end. :)

O now I'ma have to check out that story and give it amazing reviews too! X3 I'm just happy you've updated! PLEASE KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! MAKE THE NEXT ONE FASTER/LONGER~ XD Your writing inspires me~

hmm very interesting realy awesome update soon,god knows i need to...lol bye

26 was hilarious! 27... funny as well...

I like the long chapters... keep it up! ^ ^

HOLY CRAP THAT WS A FAST UPDATE! *dances* I love how you're writing Koyo! Update fast please!

...i still don't think i wanna know what made ur feet so sore...>.> neway ON NO! POOR RYKU-CHAN! IM SORRY I COULDNT SAVE U FROM THE TORTURES OF STAYING WITH SOME BITCH THAT U OBVIOUSLY CANT STAND! T.T but hey! look at the bright side! we saw each other! and im not gonna be friggin tortured to death by tobis scary and creapy and annoying antics! lol. dont give in to the bitch! watever u do dont give in to the bitch! neway i luvded this and i cant wait for the next one these are coming out so fast! ^_~
hey...look at that! another long review! not as long as the last but still long! XD

~Kohame-chan

ohmg this was great i'm going to strangle koyo reunited then forced to leave how sad thanks for updating

Yeah finally reunite! Whoo whoo i hate that Koyo bitch but i love me i totally rock
yeah thanks for updateing and i hope you update soon

...i don't think i wanna know what made u walk so much...>.> lol. neway I LUV THIS! YAY! time for the kind of reunion that will seriously save Kohame from insanity...i think it might save Ryku-chan from dieing of not being able to kill that bitch...im srry...i don't like pplz that make my Ryku-chan pissed. neway I LUV THIS! YAY! im definately in character. the only thing i could possibly think of that i would do in that situation that u didnt put would be kill Tobi...but obviously u dont want that to happen so yeah. i may be the hyper girl that will often be a lot like a certain blonde shinobi if im in the mood...but if ur doin what tobi was doin ur gonna see the ass-kicking side of me. XD ^_~ wow...longest review i think iv ever written other than the one describing my character...wow. ^_^

~Kohame

UDATE SOON! *happy happy joy joy* I love this chapter a ton, and Koyo seems perfectly good to me! :3 I love you and I love the chapter!

we~~ chapter 25~~ :D lol
it was short... >__< well i guess that's ok cuz of skool and everything tho haha
(eew skool... =3=;;)
well~ hope u update soon!! ^^