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Reviews For: Arachnophobia

PutMoneyInThyPurse 2008-06-22 ch 1,	abuseOh, wow! Spanking story with Harry and Snape and a wonderful, adorable Ron! Your spanking is realistic and quite... ooh! The characters are all very IC, and the little flashes of humour brighten it wonderfully: "He wondered if he would survive the next five years of Potter’s Hogwarts career without suffering a nervous breakdown... Fang had been the sole member of the Severus Snape fan club ever since" LOL! And you mix serious touching lines with humour beautifully, too: "He took in Ron’s pale face and the convulsive swallowing of his throat. It was obvious that the boy had been frightened out of what few wits he had." All so well written, nicely paragraphed... just lovely. And the line "Mr Weasley will suffer for countless days and nights... You wouldn’t want to be in his shoes. I hope you value his friendship enough to realize what he endured on your behalf" touched me to the heart. Truly. Especially after the delicious little explanation of "Usually, Miss Granger ended up taking pity on the boy and preparing his arachnid ingredients for him, while Snape turned a blind eye. He knew what it was like to have a phobia." Such depth, and a nice glimpse into Snape's mind and his powers of observation... and raises this lovely little tendril of speculation about what Snape's phobia might be! The comforting is very nice, especially Snape's backhanded concern "I do want to see you live to grow up, Potter" and Harry's equally backhanded appreciation "But a curiously warm feeling had settled in his stomach. Probably radiating from my butt, Harry ‘s mind scoffed." All in all, delightful. Thank you!
tracyboo 2008-06-14 ch 1,	abuseSorry for the late review. I'm so behind in reading, reviewing and writing! As with all your stories, I loved this one too. Snape's frustrated concern over Harry's safety was beautifully portrayed. Tracyboo
logansfirecracker 2008-05-25 ch 1,	abuseVery Well Written, again character perspectives are grade A, I emplore you to continue with more of your amazing 'text' talents, I look forward to read more of your work.
New Warrior of Fire 2008-04-30 ch 1,	abuseThat was so great! I totally loved it. Harry getting spanked was kinda weird, but pretty funny. There's only one thing I don't understand: What was Snape's phobia? Was he afraid of the dark?
alanandme 2008-04-12 ch 1,	abuseYes!! A big lecture about focusing more on trying to be a kid, and less on trying to get killed, and a good hard spanking, is exsactly what Mr. Potter needed!! Severus Snape Rules the world!! Thank you for another fantastic adventure!! ;)
excessivelyperky 2008-04-10 ch 1,	abuseVery good--although, given the Dursleys', wouldn't Harry have gone through worse by now? And one can hope that Snape will be motivated by these various indicators to check them out sooner than he did in canon (wasn't it an interesting coincidence that the Aurors finally checked up on the Dursleys after _Snape_ found out about them through the Occlumency lessons?).
Fawkes Song 2008-04-09 ch 1,	abusegood one.
supergirl3684 2008-04-09 ch 1,	abuseLOVED the story hun!!
Visitkarte 2008-04-09 ch 1,	abuseVery nice indeed, only one thing: I don't think he would resent Snape for letting Ron go away unpunished. Harry himself took the whole blame. If anything, he would have offered to take both of their spankings alone, being the only one responsible for the dreadful adventure. And no, Dumbledore knew nothing about Hagrid's innocence, he just simply trusted Hagrid. Harry got the evidence out of the forest. I think the second year’s adventure was Harry’s best deed ever. Without him, Ginny would really have been killed. If anybody listened to her, yes, there might have been a chance to save her before. Alas, Percy saw to that, so it wouldn't work that way.
JadeSullivan 2008-04-09 ch 1,	abuseQuinn, I adore this addition to the 'On Fire' series. And I love how you focused on Harry's guilt of thrusting Ron into a situation that caused him intense fear. Snape is so strict in your stories, yet there is a tiny bit of compassion in his character that makes him such a many-layered character. I love it. And again, your characterization of him is perfect. Also, I really liked the humor you employed toward the end of this story. This particular line had me laughing outloud: "Git, Harry thought. But a curiously warm feeling had settled in his stomach. Probably radiating from my butt, Harry ‘s mind scoffed." **So great. And exactly something I could imagine Harry saying. Great job with your stories. I do believe I'm one of your biggest fans ;)
jimmy-barnes-13 2008-04-08 ch 1,	abuseVery nice indeed, excellent stuff :D
SeverusSnake 2008-04-08 ch 1,	abuseWonderful! I always look forward to your updates. Keep up the great writing.
snapes wife to be 2008-04-08 ch 1,	abuseanother excellent adition, i wonder if snape knows harry is likely to find himself in that position very soon for being in the chamber of secrets! (that is if you are following the original story lines!) hope to see more soon x

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