So...Nadira...Kate? Never mind. It's a good story. I like 1st person better than 3rd person narration, though.

Matt left Kate? Looked to me like he had no choice...

Ahh, Kate's coming around, How oh How, will this end?

Though I don't have to fight the suspense, since I got chapter 5 waiting, the sneak peak really does make you think, you write just like Kenneth Oppel..

Kind of starting to feel bad for Matt :(

I needed a story like this to get my Kate/Matt feelings cleared, thanks, hope to enjoy the story to the fullest. :)

Thought it was brilliant, 'nuff said.

I was searching so long for a good story of the Airborn trilogy and I've finally found it! I loved this story. One of my favs. :3

OMG STILL LOVE THIS STORY!

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GREAT! I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT! Sometimes Mate/Kate stories are chessy, which means a lot of them are, because there aren't a lot out there. But this... this was so romantical (my favorite word :P) and they were so in character! I thought it was absolutely great! Wonderful. Bravo.

the first chapter actually reminds me of the song Love Story by Taylor swift :D same concept i think

i kno im alittle late...i dont even kno if ur still on here...but i just wanted to say i loved ur stories and they have encouraged me to start writing my own.

wow, awesome story

just found it and read it today

you're a great writer!

This was a really amazing story. Good job.

Frickin' awesome story. You really captured their personalities. Can't wait for the deleted scenes