Well, I never really thought about this pairing, but it's cute. <33 Thank you so much for feeding the Animal Crossing fandom. The world is sadly lacking in Animal Crossing fanfiction, but you rose to the challenge admirably! *salutes* I've written a couple drabbles myself, but I haven't published anything on here yet... ^ ^; I'm a coward. XD
Anyway, your description and everything was remarkable, and I really thought the first-person narrative made it much more effective. Two thumbs (or is that paws?) up! <3 ^ ^

great job.