description isn't enough when a person runs across a story like yours. Yeah...I can't find words to fit the way I feel about this story so I will just simply say that I liked this chapter alot and I can't wait to read the next chapter (whenever I get around to it *I'm so damn lazy when it comes to reading other peoples stuff* maybe later) oh yeah thought you might wanna know my story Mystic Power Human Strength has just been updated and also (in case you also happen to be a fan of sf2) I have just put up a story for that.
excelent look into Ildon's head. I enjoyed it greatly. Oh yeah also reading through the notes I noticed your plea (not really a plea but hey I'm working here) for people to write more sf fics so I have done just that (not for you, but hey you can take credit if it makes you feel any better) I'd be honored if a skilled writer like you would be the first to read my sf fic PLEAE...anyway I loved this one and will get around to reading the other chapters whenever I get the chan but right now I got shit to do so please read my story and I look forward to reading the rest of your story whenever I get the chance that is...
Hiya Asura! Remember me? Kamll's just using my name to hide herself from anyone who may someday stumble onto ffn and know her by her oft-used name, Kamll. Can you believe she has told hardly anyone outside the ffn-iverse about me? degrading... But anyways, she's left me in charge, and she told me to leave another review for the 3rd chapter..can do that..how would Kamll put it..? "AWESOME! OMG, You have the most totally captivating writing style ive ever read! And the story ROCKS! Yes, that about wraps up her hysterical outburst of a review..Oh, and a request for you to please review her latest chapter. She totally refuses to even try to start the next chapter without a review from her "only constant reviewer".. And trust me, you're the only.. *Kamll: I heard that! *Biyouku: O_O Best of regards to Hideaki, I gotta run!
Kamll and Biyouku 7/18/02 . chapter 4
*Biyouku: OMG, Asura agreed with you, Hide? Really? u serious? *Kamll:*pushes camel away* THAT WAS GREAT! Cant wait for the next part! But I'm having trouble with my fic now, because im not allowed on the computer anymore, so I have to sneak... And I havent written anything in forever! Biyou-chan here's bored to death. BUT your ficcy! It was so...so...YAY! *dances around the room* COOL! AWESOME! OMG YOU ROCK! *Biyouku: Asura and Hide...Agreed? *Kamll: Scary, ne? *Biyouku: Totally... Those two never stop fighting! I pity Hide.. *Kamll: I wish Hide was my muse...Then I'd write something halfway decent! *Biyouku: HEY! *Kamll: Be my muse, Hide! I'll be nicer! *Biyouku: No she won't! *Drags Kamll away*
Dias aka Hideaki given human form 7/18/02 . chapter 4
Cris (Asura), so you finally decided to update this story, eh? (Although, I'm kind of saddened that I couldn't supply as much motivation and help with these as with the others) I'm amazed that it didn't turn out as badly or as rushed as we thought it would be from the start. I know that I should just e-mail you, but I'm being lazy, and as your Muse-given-life, I believe that I am entitled to give you at least ONE review. Also, I'm flattered that you actually took my advice and had given Zozma those telepathic abilities as well. Are you going to add it in your other stories as well?
What baffles me is that you didn't realize that your fanfics could be read in that order to give Asellus' quest story-form. Are you certain that you didn't know about this? No, I know you too well. You probably really DIDN'T know. Sorry, love, but you really can be dense at times, not meaning that in a bad way... All right, I'll shut up before you hunt me down with your longsword.
I'm looking forward to inspire you in the next part as well, Cris. It may be the last part of this series , but we still have a long way to go.
Good luck in Part Five, and in all seriousness, I don't think that anybody really minds that your stories are long. I've done my own scanning around and have read so many SaGa Frontier stories which are too short to enjoy properly. In all honesty, most of them were great, but many were also so short that they left me wondering "so what happens next?". Moreover, I will assume that many people are actually that even if you procrastinate quite a bit, you at least FINISH your stories (with my *nagging* at least).
And one more thing: I am not a slave driver. I am you therapist and motivator. Luck and love always, Asura.
I've been meaning to review this fanfic for a while, as well as others... and all this time, I kept forgetting. -_
Anyways, I'd have to say that this fanfic is really quite good! I really like the way you have captured Ildon/Yildun's thoughts here. I use "really" WAY too much in my reviews. *sweatdrop* Still, this a great fanfic (as well as your others), and you should feel proud of yourself. *claps* Well done!
'Ello, you're number one fan. _ LOVELY story. It's so good and I will gladly say you're writing skills are vasty becoming more enticing. More, my lady!
Me 'n the muse here were an inspiration? kewl!*proceeds to shake Biyouku* Argh, don't be so mean to yourself, Hime! Whaddaya mean this fanfic isnt any good? It's not horrendous!It's great! *Biyouku(a little dizzily When she nearly throttles the life outta me with happiness, that means its a fact! *Kamll:(glares, lets camel go) I can't believe it! It's Ildon! With deep thoughts and emotions! Yaaay!*huggles Asura* sooo great! Well, now I'm inspired to new greatness! *Biyouku(mumbles):or new levels of insanity. *Kamll: Off to write the next chapter, my muse!*Biyouku: Can we have the "Ciato dies" ending?*Kamll*blinkblink* uh...no. *Biyouku pouts darkly*
Erin 12/18/01 . chapter 1
...ooo! I like! _ I love Illy-chan too..Can we share him..pease? Pease? oh please finish this short series!
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