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Reviews for: Crowded Loneliness
anitsirhc
2009-01-11 . chapter 3
heehee..cute..update soon! ; )
mangadreams
2008-07-30 . chapter 3
love the chapter. I was so funny how she lit up at the thought of pirates that is so her!
Hououza
2008-07-30 . chapter 3
Excellent chapter.

Very nicely done. I do feel sorry for Sunako, I think that Kyohei went a little too far. But then again sooner or later she is going to have to stop acting so hostile towards him, either that or her aunt will just make things more difficult for them.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza
mangadreams
2008-07-14 . chapter 2
great start and really fun plot:)
minagi soryou
2008-06-13 . chapter 2
oi
adorei!
hshhshs
ficou 100..0!
Por favor coloque a continuação!!


This review is in Portuguese
Hououza
2008-06-07 . chapter 2
Interesting follow up.

Seems that Kyohei is systematically digging an ever larger hole for himself.

Still, I think given that threat she will give in.

The problem is, how exactly will they fullfil that request.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza
glitterlavalamp
2008-06-06 . chapter 2
i sympathize completely, finals are always horrific. but you have a very happy reader here! lol to kyohei's method of coughcough persuasion...
Agata93
2008-05-31 . chapter 1
i can't wait for the next chapter! This will be interesting, I'm curious what you will write;] I hope that you will update soon! I add you to favourites, sayonara!
glitterlavalamp
2008-05-18 . chapter 1
lol, i like! seeing kyohei holding the underwear made me laugh, you're very good at describing situations! and grammar! *kisses feet of writer who spells and punctuates correctly* please continue this, i need a good wallflower story! and it would be completely amazaling if there was a seaweed fight like a snowball fight with seaweed) somewhere! that's my favorite part of going to the beach with my dad and sister, we get it all over each other's hair and bathing suits.
gothlola
2008-05-01 . chapter 1
wow,i'm pretty curious to see how will take place between sunako and kyohei,puts soon the next chapter (please)
I.heart.Hatake.Kakashi
2008-04-21 . chapter 1
o... can't wait to see what happens next. Very well written; love love love Kyohei and Sunako XD
Hououza
2008-04-09 . chapter 1
Interesting opener.

I like how you started this off, Kyohei already getting on her bad side.

I wonder, what is the condition and how will Sunako survive being trapped with Kyohei, he with her.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza
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