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wallflower lover P 11/21/09 . chapter 3
so FUNNY. PLEASE CONTINUE this UPDATE REALLY SOON...
wallflower lover P 11/21/09 . chapter 2
so NICE . PLEASE UPDATE SOON .
wallflower lover P 11/21/09 . chapter 1
men... this is REALLY INTERESTING. HOPE YOU CONTINUE and UPDATE SOON...
anitsirhc 1/11/09 . chapter 3
heehee..cute..update soon!)
mangadreams 7/30/08 . chapter 3
love the chapter. I was so funny how she lit up at the thought of pirates that is so her!
Hououza 7/30/08 . chapter 3
Excellent chapter.

Very nicely done. I do feel sorry for Sunako, I think that Kyohei went a little too far. But then again sooner or later she is going to have to stop acting so hostile towards him, either that or her aunt will just make things more difficult for them.

Good luck best wishes,

Hououza
mangadreams 7/14/08 . chapter 2
great start and really fun plot:)
minagi soryou 6/13/08 . chapter 2
oi

adorei!

hshhshs

ficou 100..0!

Por favor coloque a continuação!

This review is in Portuguese
Hououza 6/7/08 . chapter 2
Interesting follow up.

Seems that Kyohei is systematically digging an ever larger hole for himself.

Still, I think given that threat she will give in.

The problem is, how exactly will they fullfil that request.

Good luck best wishes,

Hououza
glitterlavalamp 6/6/08 . chapter 2
i sympathize completely, finals are always horrific. but you have a very happy reader here! lol to kyohei's method of coughcough persuasion...
Agata93 5/31/08 . chapter 1
i can't wait for the next chapter! This will be interesting, I'm curious what you will write I hope that you will update soon! I add you to favourites, sayonara!
glitterlavalamp 5/18/08 . chapter 1
lol, i like! seeing kyohei holding the underwear made me laugh, you're very good at describing situations! and grammar! *kisses feet of writer who spells and punctuates correctly* please continue this, i need a good wallflower story! and it would be completely amazaling if there was a seaweed fight like a snowball fight with seaweed) somewhere! that's my favorite part of going to the beach with my dad and sister, we get it all over each other's hair and bathing suits.
gothlola 5/1/08 . chapter 1
wow,i'm pretty curious to see how will take place between sunako and kyohei,puts soon the next chapter (please)
I-Heart-Hatake-Kakashi 4/21/08 . chapter 1
o... can't wait to see what happens next. Very well written; love love love Kyohei and Sunako XD
Hououza 4/9/08 . chapter 1
Interesting opener.

I like how you started this off, Kyohei already getting on her bad side.

I wonder, what is the condition and how will Sunako survive being trapped with Kyohei, he with her.

Good luck best wishes,

Hououza
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