This is so sad, and so beautiful. I loved it. :)

love this story. u should write another story where vincent is alive and marries yuffie. taz

*sniff* Vincent... That was so good. It was so emotional, so dramatic. So real...OMG I think I'm crying...
excellent *sniff*
~Fate

Holy crap.

I think that's about all I can say right now; I'm in such shock.

YES.
FIRST REVIEW WITH MY NEW ACCOUNT. :D

Your use of language in this fic is lovely. The format is strange, what with it alternating between past and present, but I think that makes it all the more powerful. My only suggestion would be that you explain the fluctuation between italics and normal text, so that other readers understand fully what they are reading. That way, they can focus on the beautiful story itself instead of their confusion. It wasn't confusing to me, but it may be for some people.

Other than that, I have no criticism to offer! Beautiful one-shot through and through. I love how it pivots around the color red. I vote that you write more Yuffentine.
...AFTER you write my Roy/Riza fic, of course. :D :D :D

Damn, that was emotional. Good job on it, but the ( xx ) and italics matched with the actual story makes it a bit confusing.

I don't know why this doesn't have more reviews. It's amazing.

oh wow. beautifully written. i cried at the end. wow. i swear, right now i feel like my heart is broken because of this. it was very elegant, beautiful, and melancholy.
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oh i was curious: could i write a poem for this fic? it would be centered on the color red.

very nice

T~T Excellent job. *favs*