"God had created water so that Dearka Elsman could step out of it and look like Heaven on the PLANTs.-raises hand- I AGREE. Ah, I can see that whole next paragraph in slow motion, too... That is wonderful. XD

"God had created water so that Dearka Elsman could step out of it and look like Heaven on the PLANTs." No one could have written that better! i swear, that's the best part! i could almost see yzak being tantalized by a wet dearka! lol

er...i'd leave a longer review, really, but i super need to start packing... gah, i don't wanna go on my practicum!

anyway...know that this is as entertaining and as good, as funny, and as cool as usual! you really write good dearka/yzak fics!

At first I really though someone did died... O_O

But I ended up laughing hard, mostly due to Dearka's smart-ass comments that always sounds humorous yet always gets on Yzak's nerves,and Yzak's unfortunate, embarrassing situations esp. when Dearka just causes jhim too much distractions (LOL'Oh, dear sweet Voltaire. God had created water so that Dearka Elsman could step out of it and look like Heaven on the PLANTs
That,definitely is the signature of your work piece(tats what I found :P
Hillarious,light, with a hint of mischief Nice.

And here I was hoping you'd title it "Pantsless." Oh well, I'm still WAY excited and can't believe I had to work outside for several hours in the rain building fences and moving wet stumps... lame.

Oh god, indeed. Damp, you say? (Is that a Backstreet Boys song that goes "drowning in your love?
Oh boy, I love locker rooms... hehehe. But oh dear, Dearka! Shame on you for not saving lives when ordered to!

Wait, I'm a little confused. Did someone actually *die*? Or did Yzak save the cadet in time? Does drowningdeath?

Yes! He's shirtless... but the tone is so somber here...

Oh god, Dearka... "A fire would dry you off." I LOVE how you write him... so snarky. XD

What? When you write "Yzak drowned someone" you make it sound like it was done on purpose, and here I had been assuming he merely wasn't paying attention...

ZAFT-issue bathing suits... that seems kind of amazing. Now I wonder if there suits are color coded like their uniforms...lol."Belay that order, mates" is FRICKIN AWESOME! Now I can totally see Dearka lazing about on some pirate ship, all tan and... shit. You're making me daydream here about Dearka.

Lol, "Sir." Yzak's the pirate commander.

I'd say Dearka should take everything like a man... hehehe."Aye-aye." Dear lord, you're killing me here. He's so sexy and funny and AMAZING.

God, Dearka is so snarky! I can't get over that... "You or the Council Chairman?" and then... "shit.
BEST LINE EVER"Oh, dear sweet Voltaire. God had created water so that Dearka Elsman could step out of it and look like Heaven on the PLANTs." And with the following paragraph, I think I agree. *wipes drool
Oh my, now I see how it got so serious. Hahaha. Yes, I would probably just as preoccupied.

Wait, so back to the actual point of attack here and I can't quite figure out why Dearka is laughing?

Ah! I found a typo! (And you're gonna kill me because it's the thing I always see"I... Who said anything about *me* drowning him?" So either make four periods or lower case your W."You like it when I'm wet, don't you?" Oh good god, what... how... good lord. I can't believe you... *is impressed and speechless*.

A rather enjoyable sequel, I must say. Yeah... *eyes glaze over as she remembers the wet Dearka image again* ahem, right. I likey, so no worries about whether you think you're rusty or not... haha, rusty, like, Rusty... er, I'll just stop now. Great story and I liked how you kept the same theme of Yzak being distracted and nearly killing someone because he can't take his eyes of Dearka, and yet the stories are still different. Kudos!

Haha! Excellent!

That was amazingly well done. I really like the insertion thing, where you have the action-even happen in the middle despite it actually happening before everything. It's fun to read stuff that's not in chronological order, but only if it's well-done (which this is).

You've got a bunch of really good lines in there, and the description of Dearka and the pool... oh my god... HOT.

The only thing I didn't like about this story was that I was too worried about Hanz... it sounds dorky, but I was worried that Yzak really *had* accidentally killed a cadet because he'd been too distracted... and Dearka's attitude threw me off, so I suppose I should have guessed that poor Hanz was okay the entire time. But sheesh, I was worried there, and I think the life-and-death situation sort of took away from the sexy mood. Don't get me wrong, I still *love* the story, but I think too much of my brain was thinking about poor Hanz.

On another note, I really like how Yzak recognizes the value of having Dearka around when dealing with the cadets. I like a smart Yzak rather than one that's simply angry. Good going there. Along with that characterization, I'm glad that Dearka instantly drops his joking attitude when he realizes there's a problem. And Dearka walks away so as not to distract Yzak any longer... Really good characterization, which is to be expected from you. (Despite your silly "I feel like I can't write them thanks to Death Note...
Anyway, thanks for another good one!

"Oh, dear sweet Voltaire. God had created water so that Dearka Elsman could step out of it and look like Heaven on the PLANTs.
Haha! I could not refrain from laughing. This is just too funny.

I just love Yzak's reactions when his distracted. Actually, Dearka somehow seems to be leading him on on purpose.

great great. Hope you'd write more. shirtless series.

Kkornelia

Oh MAN! You really had me going there! I though Yzak really HAD drowned poor Hanz and I was going 'Yzak! How could you?'... but I guess a wet Dearka WOULD make anyone a bit... distracted. XD
HAhaha! AWESOME story! Treading water for 30 minutes? Gawd! Remind me NOT to join any military... I hate water, too. And I can't swim... I doggy-paddle. But even that's hard. LOL

Nice to see you back in this fandom! It's been a while but I don't think you've lost your touch!
How's it going btw? Long time no talk...

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Dear lord woman...worth the wait. Loved it!

Just before we continue this...best lines ever..."Oh, dear sweet Voltaire. God had created water so that Dearka Elsman could step out of it and look like Heaven on the PLANTs." and “You like it when I’m wet, don’t you?”, mwahahaha. Oh my, the first one...I'm gonna have to start using Voltaire as a swear word. People will be like uhh? Why and I'll explain the whole thing and maybe get another recruited animer...lol, I just love Yzak's reaction there too, priceless. The latter, ha, that line was just HAHA. You knew I'd like that one though, didn't you? I'm sure anyone would like Dearka wet...

Okay...all around, hilarious. I like how Yzak doesn't like to swim, but of course he CAN...lol. Dearka shouldn't make comments like that, they get him into trouble... I was just cracking up all over the place. Aww, Yzak blushed! Gah! (that was a squeal gah...) Ha...who says Yzak was distracted? I say he was...but I don't blame him.
Great end... "No more pools with Dearka Elsman. Ever." But, it makes me sad too. I mean, pools Yzak/Dearka goodness, as proven here.