Aww . . . that's the end?
Well, I really enjoyed reading!!

really good

really good so far please finish

Aw...the end (for now), that's so disappointing . . .
-grumbles-
Anyway, I have to admit, I don’t usually read stories that include vampires in them, but your story is amazingly addicting o.o

So...Update soon!! (please!)
H.x.R

Wow!
I wonder what will happen now?!!

I was not expecting that to happen at all... I was expecting more of a fight between Gideon and Charles over Charlotte. Oh well. Surprises/twists are always good :)

'“Great!” Charles grabbed his coat and went out the door. Mrs. Abbey stopped what she was doing and went to the front counter and took a seat. ‘Five, four, three, two’ she counted down in her head. The doors bell rang again and Charles walked in with his head down.'

I loved that part . . . it was SO funny x)

And I was kind of expecting Gideon to be the boy by the lake of whom Charlotte had kissed ( I don't know why, though... xD ).

This is really great so far!
Yay! -I get to read on... I'm so lucky -LOL

LOVELY! I love the whole dad idea.

Oh my god update soon soon soon! Dying of suspense. Drake is a very entertaining character :D

ooh cliffhanger :D

“You kissed a lad, boyo?”

wonderful as always :D

Brilliance bloody brilliance! I was hoping that would happen :D

BRILLIANCE! STINKING BRILLIANCE! can't wait to read further :D

0.0 wHAT just happened?