Wow! This is the first CCS story i've ever read. it's really good. You are really an amazing writer. I've been on FF for a long time, but i think i've only ever come across one writer who i feel writes as well as you, and unfortunately for me, i no longer know who that writer was. You are very talented.

This story has an amazing plot as well. And you're very good at not leaving any loose ends, which im sure is appreciated by all of your readers.

I have a ton of things i could comment on, but im not even sure where i want to begin. Im amazed by the love between S&S, it's utterly adorable, Edward and Bella definitely have nothing on them =P

Im confused about the Shaoron and Clone guy.. well no, i understand it enough from what you've explained.. but i dont understand in the slightest where they came from originally.. but its due to the fact that i've never even heard of Tsubasa or whatever the storyline you talked about is.. my bad. i never even realized CCS went further than the show and a few movies, but i was never overly dedicated to it other than making sure i watched the entire thing in Japanese lol. obviously i never read any of the manga, since im thinking thats where this chronicle came from..

I really hope that they're able to defeat the clone guy.. and i like the idea of his eyes, they must be quite pretty to look at with his already handsome features. I wonder how he got all the scars and stuff though.. I didnt fully follow where either of them came from.. i THINK that shaoran is a clone of S&S's son and then the bad guy is a monster in him? or a clone from him or something? im not too sure how or why Shaoran is in this time if he's there future son, but i guess that'll be explained later.. or i missed it in the explanation since i was already confused lol. Im quite sad that Eriol and Mizuki will apparently lose their son though, that was upsetting news.. maybe Sakura and Syaoran will be able to prevent that somehow? and if not, well maybe they can be the Godparents of their son once he's born to them in this time?

i SO hope you get around to Syaorans visit to the Kinomoto's soon. I was SO excited when i saw that preview in like chapter 10 or something.. and i was like "YES! i still have 4 chapters before i reach the end, so obviously i'll get to read the entire visit" and then here i am, now done, and still no visit )= but you've definitely done a good job dragging it out! like, if it wasnt for the preview, i wouldnt be craving that scene so much and i wouldnt find it weird that he has yet to make it there. I wonder how many memories Touya and Fujitaka have regained since everyone else seems to have theirs. Oh, and now that Syaoran knows about their past, even if he doesnt remember it himself, im sure his reception will be slightly different with Touya, but still amazing! I hope Yukito makes another appearance! i love him (=

Oh, and i adore the length of your chapters! its just amazing that you manage to write so much. I usually try to make my chapters about 4,0 words which goes over pretty well... but your length is just amazing.. and i love it! they're such good chapters, so everytime im finished reading one i cant wait to read the next.. and now that im gunna have to wait for updates, i will particularly be fond of their length since i'll get to read so much! It sucks that you can only update once a month, but i definitely understand. Although i am glad that its been over a month since you last posted, so maybe you'll be updating soon xD

I felt really bad for Sakura when she was raped, but im glad that Syaoran and the girls have been able to help her move past it. Your scenes are really descriptive and really well done. I kinda laughed every time i went through a chapter cuz "hit back if offended" appeared so many times i was just left thinking "Hm, people must be skipping at least 5 chapters". but im sure the majority of the people reading this fiction are fine with the content.

This chapter made me smile. it was really cute at the end when the maid saw the video and thought about herself and her husband.

Well, I think i've babbled on for long enough. Ive really been enjoying this story, and im glad it was my first CCS read. Once again, i feel you're very talented and probably could even consider writing as a career if you really enjoyed it. it's honestly written just as well as any book i've ever read, and better than some. Please update when you can (=

when i first started this story, it seemed really interesting;
congrats on developing all of the twists and turns in the plot!

please update soon :D
no one wants you to give up on this story;

Hello! Congrats on the awesome series, when I first started, I'd never have guessed that it'd be slightly crossed with Tsubasa Chronicles. Still, its an awesome combination, and the story has developed very nicely in these fourteen chapters. Great job, hope to see an update soon :D

I've loved this fanfic from the very beginning :D
You're an AMAZING writerr!
please finish it :D
I'm dying to find out what happens(:

Okay, to be brutally honest, this chapter is shorter than the others. It just appeared to be longer because of "The Timeline, Revisited".
There aren't too many details. And it was getting a little annoying on how Li And Sakura kept using their pet names for each other a little too much.
I wouldn't say that this wasn't worth the wait; all I'm saying is that you should at least update faster if the rest of the chapters is going to end up like this one.
I'm a bit disappointed ):

Magnificent chapter.

So, Sakura finally told Syaoran everything and now even without his memories he is better armed to face the things that are yet to come.

But still it seems that the clone is becoming ever more dangerous as it tries to become more and more like Syaoran, although I suspect it will never be him as it knows nothing of who he was.

And even the sacrifice of Shaoron in this time is no loss in the greater scheme of things as for Syaoran and Sakura of the present their son is yet to be born.

I look forwards to the next installment.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza

Thanks for updating!!

GAH! :]] So sorry I took so long to review! I'm glad you updated! And I can't wait for the next chapter!!

interesting chapter xD loved it, update soon please!

Yay! You updated. [: I'm so caught up and finally understand everything...^^;; Hope you had a great bunch of holidays...and sorry about the whole you being away from the rest of society...ROFLMAO. :D Thank you for updating, look forward to the next! Much love, take care please!

I love this story! It reminds me soo much of Tsubasa, but then again it is completely different! The clone I am actually coming to respect as a respecable villain, trying his hardest to achieve his descusting desires. I reaaly like the plot development so far, and the recap of the entire story was helpful too! Thank you!!

~Miko

-wolf whistle- Whoo!! Go Nara-chan!! I loved this chapter, absolutely! XDD that poor maid at the end though! God, she's in for a treat XDD heehe...

^.^ you know I'll be waiting for the next chapter hun!! Can't wait to see what'll happen next, especially with clonie going to find Syaoran's ex O.O dumdumdum!

- Rai

OMG! Thank you so much for updating! Thank you as in! Thank you talaga.

Sakura and Syaoran are really SWEET! Kiligness to the bones! Waha! It's so late right now and I'm so sorry this is short! Pero, thanks talaga, UPDATE SO O O O O ON!

I'm so happy to see that you're back and with a great chapter too! I can't wait for your next updates :)

awesome...

It was worth the wait...

So Syaoran is learning how he can pleasure Sakura and how to act like Xiao LAng...

But I wonder if he will manage to be it... I mean if he can fill in For Xiao Lang...

I can't wait to read your next capter...