 sunbeth 2008-07-13 . chapter 7Loved it! I really miss the show and I love to find little treasures like this one. And well written and carefully edited to boot! I really like Ezra and I liked the Inez angle - too often she is paired w/ Buck in fics and I never really saw that as likely in the show.
I enjoyed your shadings of depth in Ezra and the other characters (even Buck! lol - his keen observations about Inez serving were great) and everone managed to stay in character w/out being carictured =).
And although the event that triggered it was frightening and horrible - I liked the lightheartedness that subtly permeated the story (really, Brotherhood is good but so tragic). Wow, it's late here - hope this managed to be coherent =) - thanx for the great story.
Love Ezra - I'll read Post holes next - can't wait for it!
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 Sarai 2008-04-28 . chapter 7I enjoyed it! |
 Cassandra30 2008-04-14 . chapter 7Inez really is sweet. So is Ezra. Good chapter. Very well written. |
 Cassandra30 2008-04-14 . chapter 6Actually Buck would understand about Inez's embarrassment quite well. His way of helping her get over it would be to settle differently that is all. Well written. Nicely conceived story. Highly enjoyable. :) |
 Cassandra30 2008-04-14 . chapter 5 You know if Ezra simply bought the red notes at 90 cents on the dollar he would do better and cause less trouble! Interesting story! I like it! |
 Cassandra30 2008-04-14 . chapter 4They should be punished, I agree. But what justice would get?? This she is in charge of them getting released not some idiot who thinks they didn't do anything wrong. |
 Cassandra30 2008-04-14 . chapter 3Good update. Well written! I could hear that darn rooster myself. Felt very sorry for them! |
 Cassandra30 2008-04-14 . chapter 2Woot! Good one, Vin! Agreed, Inez doesn't need the gossip either. Excellent chapter. Great story. |
 Cassandra30 2008-04-10 . chapter 1Way to go, Ezra!! Inez is a doll. I adored her. Still do, I guess. She is such a sweetheart. She deserves something special. I like the idea of the story. So far you are doing a very good job. |