Now that is just funny and a little sexy.

Thanks

haha excellent endin v funny:) really good story, v well written it most have been hard writing fm tv 2 page, so well done:) i liked tis story so i look forward to readin more by you. Keep up the good work! xx

I couldn't stop laughing at the last part. So sweet.

HAHAHAHA! I LOVED it! If all of the tension and the hot kiss wasn't enough, the tree knocking out zero in the end made this one of my favorite stories! nicely done!

oh cool! the apple throwing trees!

very funny and oh so fluffy!

So was DG just using Jeb to make Wyatt jealous or was Jeb in on the whole deal?

Cute. I don't know if you intended it, but the part with the apple-throwing trees was a nice link back to Wizard of Oz. All in all, it was pretty awesome!

It may be lame to be the first person to review your own story, but I just had to let the world know I realize the first line in the story was SUPPOSED to have been deleted, and yet...there it is. And unfortunately, I haven't a clue how to fix it...:(