Your story is good... but where's Fleur?

You were right to suggest this story to me. It was lovely. I love Bill and Fleur, they're one of my favorite couples in the books, and Bill's a great character - you added depth to him but still made him believable when compared to what we see of him in the books. Wondefully done.

(I also can't stop expressing how impressed I am by your OC's, either, you're about the only writer here who can do them seamlessly.)

I have spent the last week trying to come up with a review good enough for this fic and I still can't think of anything more than,

Absolutely positively amazing! every single detail was great I fell in love with Bill, Anna is brilliant character and I just thoroughly enjoyed this.

I can't understand why you only have 10 reviews it is just not right or fair.

thank you so much for sharing.

It is wonderful to find a fic written with such honesty and emotion. You kept the characters sound and so very REAL right throughout the fic.

All I can say is thank you for a wonderfully written and delightfully entertaining story. I do hope you will offer more with characters like Anna and I love your Bill and Fleur.

Wow. This is a wonderful story. It's absolutely amazing. I've never seen Fleur or Bill ever characterized this way, and Anna was brilliant.

Really great story. I don't have enough good things to say about it.

For an OC story you did pretty good. Normally I don't read them I actually really liked this story so I really am looking forward to other stories in the future.

Oh, dear! If I knew you better I would have called you dearest, and that is a privilege a grant very few. This fic is absolutely amazing. I love Anna. I wished more than once that he would be Bill's bride instead of Fleur, but you made it so real that it was true even in these moments of awkward reality. The "what if's" we all have in life. I really loved that. I normally hate OFC, and I had never before searched for stories with Bill as a main character. It was dumb luck that brought me to you and for that, I'm glad. The best gifts in life are those that get us with our guards down. Don't be hard on yourself for the lack of reviews. They underrated this fic. For it is a true story of friendship and love. I thank you for that. You are amazing, dear. Congratulations for the wonderful work.

Regards

Pandora

lol, very cute story. It's nice to know that Anna survived the war safely.

~Tina101

Poor Bill!! At least he has people like Fleur and Anna around to help him.

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Aw, that's so sweet, proposing to Fleur in French. That's so romantic!!

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I really like Anna's style, so outgoing and blunt yet so sensitive.

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Aw, poor Bill!! Now he's all alone in Egypt.

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I think you did a great job with Bill. You had just the right amount of teenagernish and the older brother attitude.

~Tina101