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ToraChibiChan 2008-07-23 ch 6,	abuse... -hides explosives- GAH. LUKEWTFBBQHAMSTERSQUIRREL?!!?!?! Even if he WAS gunna die- LET HIM DIE KNOWING FOR SURE THAT-- GHK;HAGSKdga -cough/doesn't... esplode... sort of... maybe a little?- Well then. Spazzing aside, it was another marvelous chapter! Honestly, I think that if you turned the Anonymous Reviews back on, you have so many more reviews 83 And... while I know you already got an offer, I'd also be willing if maybe you'd like two different views? -shrug- I'd be honored, YasuJ-sama... -bow- Yes. I am crazy. Ph34r it. I should probably stop now O.o... so I shall. Again, great job, I hope to hear more from you soon :D
Onaqua 2008-07-22 ch 6,	abuseAh! Nonononono! Finally another chapter! But NOAH! Luke! I understand why he didn't say yes, but he should have said SOMETHING! NOAH DON'T DIE! You wouldn't do that to Luke would you? Please update faster next time! I love this story and I've been checking it for like months! Keep teh chapters coming, they are getting better and better!
Forbidden Romance 2008-07-21 ch 6,	abuseNoah cannot be dead! He can't. sobs Please update son! Oh, and you said you needed a beta. I'll do it if you want. =D
ToraChibiChan 2008-07-11 ch 5,	abuseOH. MY. GOD. do you know how much i almost died when i saw that you hadn't updated since May? I almost got the impression that you WEREN'T. GOING. TO. KEEP. GOING. -eyetwitch- You have to write ONE more, YasuJ!! please! you can do it! just-- WRITE THE AWESOME FLUFF OF THEM BEING ABLE TO SEE EACH OTHER AGAIN! THE TEARS! THE HUGS!A HFKSDHFASHG'DL -esplodes- ... Awesome story xD but PLEASE, keep it up! I'm favoriting and everything! 8D
Forbidden Romance 2008-06-13 ch 5,	abuseAwesome story! I love it.
angelabaldwin 2008-05-05 ch 5,	abuseYea a new chapter. I loved it. Poor Noah in so much pain. Luke having a freak out over his phone gone missing. Sounds like my teenagers. Great job, can't wait for the next chapter.
AngelofMusic18 2008-05-05 ch 5,	abusei'm so excited u updated! it was such a relief that noah got to the cell phone in time, before the battery died! do the police and search parties find noah? is he ok?...really great job on this last chappie! ~angel
AngelofMusic18 2008-04-22 ch 4,	abusethis is so good! pleez update! i love Nuke! pleez?! ~angel
Nickeltjuh 2008-04-15 ch 4,	abuseWhoohoo, Noah is finally free.. but now he's out cold! I really hope someone or something wakes him up because he needs to get back to real Luke before the poor guy goes insane with hurt and grief and guilt! Loving this story and can't wait for more! =D
angelabaldwin 2008-04-13 ch 3,	abuseI am totally loving this story. Very interesting. I can't wait to find out what happens next.
angelabaldwin 2008-04-12 ch 2,	abuseI am liking your story so far. Poor Noah, hurt and all alone. Luke so distraught he can't eat. Keep up the great work. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Nickeltjuh 2008-04-11 ch 2,	abuseThose poor boys! They're both in so much pain, one physical and the other emotional and they can't help eachother through it! =( Loving the story, it's great and I can't wait for more!
zcst4eva 2008-04-10 ch 2,	abuseA liitle on the short side but that's ok!! I'm lovin' your take on Luke and Noah! It's so interesting to see how different people interpret their characters! Nice job, Keep up the great work!!
zcst4eva 2008-04-09 ch 1,	abuseOh, don't keep us in suspense!! I love your writing style! It's very unique for an author to put their own thoughts into the story but it works!! And I'd love to Beta for you - I'm very good at editing what is already written, I just have a hard time writing my own stuff. But I love to read and my Mom taught me all I need to know about proofreading and editing! **I think Noah got Luke a commitment ring (a white gold band with a ring of diamonds around the middle, very tasteful and romantic - engraved: Luciano - My Love, My Heart, Always) What do you think?
Vaula 2008-04-09 ch 1,	abusePlease update soon, can't wait to read more! :)

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