I think it's awesome Cyphrin got to see stars finally. I like how this is coming along, the Doctor learning from past mistakes and not wanting to try to keep too many secrets with this companion and I also like the way you write the Doctor, he seems so impish. But you really need a beta reader, you have many mistakes and some of them are so easy to point out and read. Get online sometime when I'm on and I'll help if you want with the grammar issues ^__^

Good Luck and Happy Writing
-K.M.

This sounds good so far-- nothing like having the Hero show up in the nick of time to save the main character. I think you did a good job with the otherworldlyness of the Doctor, with his rambling and mannerisms. I'm not quite a Doctor Who fan but I am a fan of your writings so this I'll do my best to stick around and R&R for you :D

Good Luck and Happy Writing
-K.M.