I think you might have something here...but anyway, thanks for letting us read it ^^
I think the creepy dude in the mirror in the 14th's room is either someone really good at mimicry or is Allen's 'mirror image', because he copies every single movement Allen does.

Allen's a lot nicer though; mirror guy is creepy.

You have some good ideas ^^ And baby Allen must just be as adorable as you write him to be...
Good story, but poor 14th...I want to watch Ep. 93 of D-Gray Man but I don't think it's out yet. *Sigh* I'll wait like everyone else...but the suspense is gonna almost kill me D:

XD Lol excuse my rambling.

I really like it, I even would like that this was the real history of the 14th, but Hoshino-senseii is cruel D= Well, doesn't matter, pretty good job, that was so sweet.

...you made baby Allen cry! ;_;

Touching, heartwarming, and very sad. But very well written! It was a bit short, I feel you could elaborate more on maybe how Mana, Cross, and the 14th met, who his wife was, etc, but the storytelling was good! I loved how the Earl and Road were sad they had to kill him. It was a good emotion to show.

Overall, it's great!

Sounds pretty good.. Liked it.. ^^

it'd be nice if the fourteenth was Allen's dad

I liked the feel of this fic. Serious, but heartwarming.