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Mike
2009-03-15 . chapter 1
Awesome story!
Ascoeur
2008-12-27 . chapter 1
aw!!totally cute ^^
Anon
2008-11-26 . chapter 1
Well you met my expectations. This fic is probably one of the cutest pieces of fluff on the interwebs. You did a great job keeping Konata and Kagami in character. i luv this fic.
Kou1
2008-10-06 . chapter 1
I don't normally review, and even more so for fiction I happen to come across while skittling across 's extensive pages. But something this extraordinary calls for something equally beyond normal.

Very well written fiction. Brilliant first-person narrative. Excellent pacing. Very well done.

Just a note... Perhaps the short sentence/paragraphs towards the end should not come in such quick succession for the ease of the reader (just a slight suggestion I used to get from my English teacher).

I had to read this several times over before being satisfied enough to go to bed.

This fic is a ray of hope amongst the increasing tide of poorly-written stories in these dark, dark days. I SALUT YOU!
Karsten69
2008-09-22 . chapter 1
the only reason someone would flame this for is if they hate yuri. it is well-written and they are not too much ooc. and of course they are a wonderful couple.
yojimbo89
2008-07-26 . chapter 1
I loved it KAWAII
Mojoe2
2008-07-06 . chapter 1
Nice story, Enjoyed the depth of thoughts.
SilverHerring
2008-05-06 . chapter 1
I like this because it manages to be stylish without being dramatic/overdone and straying from the spirit of the series.
Good work.
The.Hoppy
2008-05-02 . chapter 1
I'm in love... *floats* That was wonderful. I'm not usually a fan of almost-flowery internal thoughts, but you made it work. And while a couple of Konata's lines felt a bit off, I suppose if she were speaking seriouly it might...but anyway. The dialogue was great, the way it played out was great, the greatness of it was...great. *grins* Write more? Not necessarily for this (it works as a one-shot), but lately I've needed to read something /good/ in this fandom and you've just become my hero for the day.
~Naolin
lonelygurl123
2008-04-12 . chapter 1
Oh my goodness so...BEAUTIFUL! T_T I absolutely LOVED IT! Do you make anymore yuri stories? Or better yet Lucky star stories?? I love your writing!
Duran the Warrior
2008-04-10 . chapter 1
A) I think Kagami's grades are more due to hard work than raw brain power (That would be Miyuki and Konata)

B) Nice little fic; while I think there's too much Konami and such here, but doesn't chance the fact things were well done, and the line at the end... PURE Konata.
Saharet
2008-04-10 . chapter 1
Great fic! An interesting style, characters mostly "in-character" and a pervy Konata moment to end it all... What more to ask?
*thumbs up*
Awesome, keep writting, you are talented :3
Lil-Donkey
2008-04-10 . chapter 1
*_* Someone saved my Konami hunger. Thank you!

Very nice that way you've put it in Kagami's perspective.
Spikesagitta
2008-04-09 . chapter 1
*thumb up* nice, i love it :)
No account for me
2008-04-09 . chapter 1
Great work. I really enjoyed it. It's funny, I was feeling deprived of Konami myself, so I'm glad I saw this today.

I think one or two of Konata's lines were a tiny bit out of character, but the majority of them were impressively IC (especially that ending line), and I know that she's difficult to write accurately. I don't mind Kagami's inner thoughts being more lingustically elaborate, I do that when I write her myself. It makes it more enjoyable to read, and it is believable coming from someone like her.

Overall, this was well-written, IC, and terribly cute. Why isn't there more like it?? Anyway, you may have inspired me to stop hiding away the L*S stuff that I wrote and put it here. Thanks for the read.
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