Love it!)

Well done! Excellent characterization. For a moment there I thought Harry was gonna be a noble prat again. Don't worry about it being sappy, there is a time and a place for after all.

I don't think this was sappy at all. In fact, I rather enjoyed it. Lovely work.)

That made me cry

Very Sweet. I love it.

Very cute.

SMile!

Oh gosh, I loved it! It wasn't too sappy. It was nice :D The characters and reactions were pretty well written!

I thought it was cute. And I like the cliches lol.

Actually, pretty good. This could have been worked into a much longer story with a little effort. Kudos to you for a sweet story.

pretty good. cute.