54Viruses 2008-07-01 . chapter 7Yes! Another chapter! Nice job of comparing and contrasting all the turtles against each other. |
Paranoid Puppy 2008-05-31 . chapter 6I can't wait for you to add more!! Please do so asap!! :) |
Tink17 2008-05-07 . chapter 6This is a great story! It really shows Leo's heart and what drives him. Thanks so much for sharing! |
Tink17 2008-05-07 . chapter 5Great story! I especially like the end with Leo walking into the end of the conversation about him. Thanks for sharing! |
Suifox 2008-05-04 . chapter 6Grand job so far. Keep it going.
Hope to see more from you soon. ^_^ |
54Viruses 2008-05-04 . chapter 6Interesting.
I can see Leo somehow managing to inspire his brothers in his death. |
54Viruses 2008-05-04 . chapter 5One of these days the guys are going to tatoo Leo in his sleep, it will read "If found in Kitchen, Remove Immediately!"
I like your example of Leo's cooking prowess! |
Tink17 2008-04-24 . chapter 4Nice character study. I especially like the ending; well done! |
Tink17 2008-04-12 . chapter 3Very sweet! I can certainly see Mikey thinking like this. |
Tink17 2008-04-12 . chapter 2This was great! So typical Mikey! I'm still smiling! |
54Viruses 2008-04-11 . chapter 3Poor Mikey. The sky can fascinate so many, yet it clearly holds more importance to him. Good insight. |
54Viruses 2008-04-11 . chapter 2I'm not sure if you've nailed the meaning of metaphor but who am I to complain?
Anywho, I like the story, Donnie chasing Mikey like that is so entirely ironic yet fitting, love it! |
Tink17 2008-04-10 . chapter 1Oh, how sweet! I love it! I look forward to your other prompts! |
LeaMarie F. Metallium 2008-04-09 . chapter 1Really cute. I await the next. |