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54Viruses 2008-07-01 . chapter 7
Yes! Another chapter! Nice job of comparing and contrasting all the turtles against each other.
Paranoid Puppy 2008-05-31 . chapter 6
I can't wait for you to add more!! Please do so asap!! :)
Tink17 2008-05-07 . chapter 6
This is a great story! It really shows Leo's heart and what drives him. Thanks so much for sharing!
Tink17 2008-05-07 . chapter 5
Great story! I especially like the end with Leo walking into the end of the conversation about him. Thanks for sharing!
Suifox 2008-05-04 . chapter 6
Grand job so far. Keep it going.

Hope to see more from you soon. ^_^
54Viruses 2008-05-04 . chapter 6
Interesting.
I can see Leo somehow managing to inspire his brothers in his death.
54Viruses 2008-05-04 . chapter 5
One of these days the guys are going to tatoo Leo in his sleep, it will read "If found in Kitchen, Remove Immediately!"
I like your example of Leo's cooking prowess!
Tink17 2008-04-24 . chapter 4
Nice character study. I especially like the ending; well done!
Tink17 2008-04-12 . chapter 3
Very sweet! I can certainly see Mikey thinking like this.
Tink17 2008-04-12 . chapter 2
This was great! So typical Mikey! I'm still smiling!
54Viruses 2008-04-11 . chapter 3
Poor Mikey. The sky can fascinate so many, yet it clearly holds more importance to him. Good insight.
54Viruses 2008-04-11 . chapter 2
I'm not sure if you've nailed the meaning of metaphor but who am I to complain?

Anywho, I like the story, Donnie chasing Mikey like that is so entirely ironic yet fitting, love it!
Tink17 2008-04-10 . chapter 1
Oh, how sweet! I love it! I look forward to your other prompts!
LeaMarie F. Metallium 2008-04-09 . chapter 1
Really cute. I await the next.
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