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| Nosi 2008-09-03 ch 1,  | abuseThis was wonderful - very enjoyable. I love how you've portrayed Tonks' vivacity but also her insecurity as she shoots her mouth off. The conversation and banter between them is terrific -enlivening and thoroughly entertaining. |
| Owl Emporium 2008-08-23 ch 1, | abuseAw, that was very sweet. Great job; I loved this! (: Angelica |
| MollyCoddles 2008-07-14 ch 1, | abuseM, I'll have another serving of chocolate-topped awkwardness, if you please. It's very sweet. ;) Delightful first meeting fic! |
| kathygreeneyes 2008-05-30 ch 1, | abuseOoh la la. This was perfect! I love you even more, if that's possible. Beautifully done. =] |
| IrishCailin16 2008-05-01 ch 1, | abuseAw, that was so sweet, and very fitting to the characters and what I imagined it to be like! Good job! Is this a one-shot or is there more on the way? |
| Wotcher-Tonks 2008-04-28 ch 1, | abuseamazing! |
| Lyra Waterflame 2008-04-25 ch 1, | abuseLOL... That was great! Best RLNT I've read in ages! I'm so glad you wrote it!! |
| vampiratelycan 2008-04-12 ch 1, | abuseLovely! Brill! :D |
| True Queen Of Chaos 2008-04-11 ch 1, | abuseI LOVED this! It was fantastic, N/R amazingness, 100% adorable... the list goes on. Totally going on the faves list! |
| Flo M Nimo 2008-04-10 ch 1, | abuseNice one ! I want more ! -- Flo |
| Siruisblack18 2008-04-10 ch 1, | abuseI REALLY LOVED THIS! :) especially how the end takes on more of a romantic tone! this was THE BEST! |
| NaginiFay 2008-04-09 ch 1, | abuseThis is great and funny too! |
| ishandtwofourths 2008-04-09 ch 1, | abusehuzzah! it's always lovely to see a new fic from you, and as usual, this was dandy. i like to see all sorts of different takes on first meetings. i'm TRYING to work on my own now, actually... once i actually find time to write! but my point is that i guess it can be somewhat difficult to do something a bit different, and i think this one works QUITE well. great mix of remus and tonks simulataneously clicking and meshing, yet having awkward moments. but such great banter! loved the chocolate-thievery. so, yes. delightful, as always! :) |
| ProphecyGirl 2008-04-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis has made me smile with so much pleasure. It says everything I love about Remus and Tonks. You didn't have them fall for each other right off but it's there in what they say and do, the dialogue is exactly like a first meeting, and exactly like THEM. I adore the back and forth with the chocolate and all the banter. Great job! |