|Reviews for What a day|
| TheTV-Junkie 4/28/11 . chapter 1
*Phew. Fanning myself* Chocolate syrup, a scarf and icecubes - I REALLY appreciate your way of thinking! ;-) Good story, lovely development and as you just wrote - what a way to go! :-) Nevertheless I wouldnt rate it MA, its much too sweet for that! :-)) Keep going!
| boymommytotwo 1/11/11 . chapter 1
i really like the playfulness of this... from the beginning when i didn't know for sure if gibbs was just being friendly and then later when they were together... and then abby's teasing of gibbs.
| heidimillett3 12/30/10 . chapter 1
| PT21 8/31/09 . chapter 1
Hubba hubba. Nice! ;)
| finlaure 3/22/09 . chapter 1
Three words: Cold Shower Now!
Great, wonderful, I loved it, can you help me with my water bill?(haha)
| STLFAN 2/10/09 . chapter 1
Another nice story. Two little things, it is CafPow not CufPow and its Abbs, not Abb. I'm want to be helpful, not critical. Again, thanks for sharing your stories.
| Chimeras-star 4/9/08 . chapter 1
Hey there... I hate to be the one to tell you this, and keep in mind that I'm not trying to hurt your feelings, but your grammar and spelling are not all that good. I know how easy it can be to make a few mistakes in a story, but you really should have gotten a friend or beta-reader to look this over before you posted it. There is nothing wrong with the concept of your story, but it looks to me (and it will look the same to other readers) that perhaps English isn't your native language? Either way, get yourself a beta-reader or friend and your writing will improve for the better. Just remember, I'm not flaming your story, I'm just letting you know. -Oh, and your review submission is not set to allow annonymous reviews, so if you want more, you may want to change that.
Good luck with your future stories!