I REALLY LIKE THIS FIC.
YOU ARE DOING A GOOD JOB WRITTING IT.
I THINK THE CONCEPT OF THIS FIC IS INTERESTING.
PLEASE KEEP THE GOOD STUFF COMING
LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT ONE

SO... You decided to end the story like this? I mean WTF their are no explanations no anything, trust me its not cool or brilliant when stories just end at a peak, u have to take us down! Its lazy and annoying! WHY. :@ Now I really do hate u. >:(

please update asap i love tis story

Aah...yay...u updated...glad to see it. Made me smile...
And it was so worth it!!

This fic rocks!! Hope you continue on with it...

And I'm so looking forward to more Brucas & Rathan (those couples better be endgame..lol)...

Also just looking to see how the situation Brooke & Rachel are dealing with turns out...
And of course how the Scott Brothers will try to protect them...

Cause you know these boys...always have bit of that hero thing going on...lol

UD SOON!! :)

0.o... but... no... huh... what the freak man...o.0... come on brooke... go back right now...0.0

dont let man hands peyton get in ya way of happiness... bad man hands... no talkie 2 brookie like that lol

luke what u doing run after her... fight 4 her... dont let mans hands win... b a lukie man go after whats ur's...0.0

stupid chickie bothering my brucas... bad sister... bad... haha

please dont fall back in2 wonder sl u t mode... u r better then that luke lmao ;p

like ya story

update


moon out

another great chapter! I really love BL as a couple, and I love a good "I hate you/I love you" relationship. typical peyton getting in the way but I have faith in BL.

Great so far. Will Lucas really fight for Brooke? Will Peyton stop being such a **? What is going on with Rachel and Nathan?

fantastic update! I loved the fact that they (brooke and lucas) have fully underestood their feelings, though they haven't declared it to one another. It was very sweet. Peyton and Haley finding out was surprising, but I guess that would have eventually happened. I hate the fact that Bill has such an impact on their lives even though he's out of the picture at the moment. Anyways, great writing and update soon!

love the update
so glad to see in update after so long
cant wait for more

Love it! Please update soon! This is a great story! I cant wait for the next one!

I just found this fic and I LOVE IT!...

My #1 pairing overall is Neyton (I love Nathan/Peyton) that's my main OTH ship...

All other pairings are equal at #2...pairings which do include Lucas/Brooke & Nathan/Rachel...
(Naley, Brathan and Jeyton being those I DO NOT SHIP--though like as only friends..lol)

I have many ships...mostly UC lol

I love the character of Rachel...and the friendship she developed with Brooke was nice to see...
She's more than just a slutty **...underneath is a very insecure girl (like I am sure all or most girls are..lol)

I also Love Brooke (and Peyton and Haley and the Scott boys of course..lol)

Anyways...it's great to see a BRUCAS & RATHAN FIC...and it would be great seeing more LB & NR fics out there...
(I do know that many of the ones that do exist are pretty anti Peyton...and I'm hoping we get more, but maybe some not so anti peyton..lol)

Plus this plot is REALLY INTRIGUING & I WOULD DEFINITELY LOVE TO SEE WHERE IT GOES..
AND TO MAKE SURE THE FIC ENDS UP BEING LB & NR...lol

I hope to see you continue with it..it'd be a shame to not be able to continue this great fic.

okay But I want to know is BROOKE PREGNANT? Please let her be! please continue with a little more angst

wow i am loving your fic its just soo different love the relationhips between each character i lvoe all the brucas scenes
update soon

so glad to see you back
cant wait for more

Such a great story! I love that you've made Rachel & Brooke cousins, and the entire plot in itself is amazing! :) Please write more soon!