honestly, i think the ending and all suited him. i mean, come on. kishimoto isnt gonna pull sum miracle crap on us where everything is rainbows and sunshine, ryt?

i doubt itll be drawn out to the point where happiness is impossible, but, there will be sum fruity love.

happy unbirthday

--frumpyrox

I enjoyed this--it was fun to read. ...Not, like, FUNfun, but sort of...I dunno, the kind of fun that ends in tears? Anyway.

Lovely story.

YOU DORK, I DIDN'T JUST LIKE IT. I WORSHIP IT. I COVET IT. IT WILL BE ON MY FAV LIST--YES, MY VERY SMALL FAV LIST BECAUSE I AM A STINGY, HARD TO PLEASE MORON.

And hey, you were only like...four months early. Ahahahahaha?

No, seriously, this was beyond brillinat. It reached epic proportions. I was totally blown away at what a fabulous job you did with Sasuke's character. Totally over the moon here, you did such an amazing job. Oh my god. Wow.

Isn't it depressing? REN IS LEAVING US! (...Where am I going to get my daily crack? WHY?)
...
This is a good story. Some parts felt...slightly repetative (the word choices did that. You would occasionally use one word in one sentence, and then use it again in the next)

I like how he doesn't love her, for she is just Sakura and he is Sasuke and Sasuke doesn't know how to love, even when Sakura tries. And the little sections where nice.

(Yeah. The ending didn't feel complete. And it wasn't too confusing.
English class took care of that. We learn to analyze everything, even something a person eats.)

Are you going to update "The Ocean" anytime soon?