u just stopped it...right there...it kinda sounds like a nice ending but still...
im subscribing :D
you have a way with K18 fanfics that i just cant stop reading once i start them.

the end of this chapter made me cry >.< Vegeta is just like that monster spopovich (from the martial arts tournament) :((

You Have some true potential i realy enjoyed this chapter i am also a fan of 18 she is awesome i hope to read more stories from you in the future you have a wonderfull imagination and take that as a compliment because not many people can come up with this kind of writing as you did i realy liked it hope to hear you in the future take care and keep writing bye

Sayan Gomez
3-25-09
I'm Hooked on your stories take up journalism you have talent
DON'T WASTE IT.

I really liked this story, I didn't want it to end, I usually don't care for love stories, but this one is different, maybe it's just coz it's about Krillin and 18 getting together. the only thing i saw as not quite right was some of the spelling and grammar, but to me it's imperfections somehow added to 18's character and her struggle with herself, my favourite Fan fiction yet, and I've red quite a few

i liked it

Hey,

I really liked your story! :) I 've always been a fan of 18 and Krillin. I'm glad someone made a good story about the two of them getting closer.
Yeah.. the last chapter was a bit short, perhaps you can make it longer if you have the time :) , I'd like that.

Keep up the good work!

Chris

This story was fantastic! Why? Because it had loads of elements of a pro. The anger emotion from 18 was excellently exploited with your language! I disagree with Krillin fan as an emotion cannot be exaggerated if it can be justified. Plus it makes the ending so much more satifying.
Well pros: Great emotional empathy and style- explicit, so sharp and smooth at the same time.
Cons: None worth mentioning- Almost perfect for this style.

Big improvement on "Be careful what you wish for"!

Sorry to hear you've been sick. I was yesterday, and it was the weirdest thing; dizzy, nauseous, and a pounding headache, but it only lasted a few hours and then I was perfectly fine. Weird, huh?

Anyways, nice chapter. It's good to see 18 opening up a little bit.

I am really enjoying this story. It's completely flawless. And Krillin is so damn in character, it's scary! Keep it coming. 10 out of 10!!

I LOVE this story. Partially because I'm probably the biggest Krillin fan in the world, but it is written almost perfectly. I just Krillin would have beaten Vegeta to a pulp for what he did to 18. Awesome story. Please update soon ^__^

Pretty good, I liked all chapters.. Sometimes it has out of character moments and weirdness all together but for the most part it's all right.

Well, this is certainly different from the norm. I think you may be overdoing her angry persona just a tad, but it's refreshing to see a change for once. Hope to see more soon.

Good story, the attitude you gave 18 fits her character and is not a way I have seen people take with a K/18 fic.

stupid vegeta..ruining everything and saying things that really shouldn't be said. After all 18 said she wasn't up to anything. I think he actually ruined everything since she wanted to actually become part of the group...well, at least talk and eat. If that bastard only...damn, the vegeta you wrote down here is just as annoying as the anime./.. well done! it's hard to keep a character in character like you have.

oh btw, Yamcha...trying to talk back at 18 in a previous chapter..he knew he didn't stand a chance...the sucker :P

great chapter, update soon!