gosh you r so right i never noticed tht!

I am now going to read this

heard that one before in Some of Tim's Stories. it's kind of a neat allusion even if unitentional. good job.

"Because in a game where points equals human lives, it is sometimes hard to keep score." I really really like that. For some reason it just struck me. Wow. The whole story's great but that line just... I don't know it just hit me. I like it

i liked the last three chapters a lot. i really liked the drabbles. i was wonderin if mayb u would consider wtitin a story about the wen POny had run away rfom Darry. that what if Soda and Darry had followed him and JOhnny, & johnny didn't stab the soc, but pony was , like hurt real bad.

idk i jst thin k u would be great at writin such a story.:)

Great. Keep going!

It is a very cool thing to see the different scenes of the book through other eyes!

Goodness, what a very good, emotive chapter despite its shortness. Nice work.

BlindedxxFalcon practically took the words out of my mouth. Or keyboard. You probably don't know this, but I love your stories like...like a fat kid loves cake. :D You're truly a brilliant writer. That's really all I wanted to say after reading this chapter.

Wow. You have a way with words, Logan.

omg, wicked great update. you did an awesome job, can't wait for more!

Once again, I think you did a really nice job with Darry's POV, and your writing is very good. My only comment is that if you go by the events in the book, Darry was the first one who stopped to haul Ponyboy up off the ground, and he stayed with him until the rest of the gang came back.

Liz

Very nicely written. I love reading Darry's POV, and I think you did a great job with it. Moving on to chapter 2 . . .

Liz

omg, really really good update, great job

All I can say about this story is that I'm really interested. This is the 1st Darry fanfic that I've read without changing POV in the middle of the chapter (I despise that!). More?