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| marialisa 2008-04-19 ch 1,  | abuseLove the chemistry between Stella and Flack. The scene at the end, with Mac finding them on the couch and noticing how Flack is holding her 'protectively close' was a nice moment too. |
| LiaBelle 2008-04-14 ch 1, | abusevery impressive. i loved the unspoken little nod of approval from mac to don... |
| bookworm45 2008-04-10 ch 1, | abuseGood job. |
| LaneIA 2008-04-10 ch 1, | abuseThis was wonderful! I loved the emotions that Stella was bottling up and her attempt at releasing them. Your interaction between them was so very belivable! |
| notesofwimsey 2008-04-09 ch 1, | abuseI like this a lot - I think you have some really interesting dynamics going on here, and yet managed to keep everyone within character. Nice work! |
| TessaStarDean 2008-04-09 ch 1, | abuseWow. Just wow. There's so much in there...Stella's fears, Don's relief at her being alive, the deep and trusting relationship between Mac and Stella...I loved it. I'm gonna be sad when I watch the ep tonight, aren't I? |
| ThnksFrThMmrs87 2008-04-09 ch 1, | abuseFabulous, just fabulous. |