XD That's our Reno...

Will many KH characters be in the story?

That was very entertaining and easy to follow. I liked the overall characterisation and the pace was very nice. The grammar was a bit shaky at the beginning, with a few mixed-up words, but it smoothed out towards the end and did not distract from the plot.

I think the ending was just great. The introduction of new characters, the explanation for the whole fiasco, and the culmination of the story's main plot line were all handled with a good mix of humour and practicality.

that was great! good job on this fic^^ i was laughing at the end when reno was gonna head back to the bar for that blond. so like him. hahaha

Aw, its over, but you did a really good job mixing so many different game and movie plots... and all into just four chapters! While, yes it was pretty obvious that you were going to bring Riku and Sephiroth into the case, the actual ending was not predictable for me.

Congrats on finishing a story! I look forward to your next work.

I knew it was axel but I didn't know sephy was involved. what a twist. You are very good at these type of stories. I hope to see more soon.

Very nice - I liked the surprise ending, with Axel being mistaken for Reno. I always thought Axel's somebody or other would be Reno. Overall the story was hilarious, and I really enjoyed reading it. :)

This wasn't as funny as the other chapters, but I'm still glad you submitted it. I'm horribly obsessed and I need to draw pictures for it but I'm too lazy and forgetful to find references.

I've got a list of friendshippings that could be pulled off due to this fic. *pulls out list*

Ahem!

Yuffie Kisaragi and Maya Fey. The hyperactivity will kill.
Larxene and Franziska von Karma. The sadism will create a new threat.
Sephiroth Hojo and Miles Edgeorth. They are both refined men and would have nice conversations.
Reno, Axel and Larry Butz. They are womanizers of the fandom.
Marlene Wallace and Pearl Fey. Two little girls everyone adores.

I'll get obsessive later. Thanks for writing this.

This was an intriguing and amusing chapter. I like the clear direction of the story and the characterisation is consistent. Miles stepping in for Phoenix and Cloud standing up for Reno were both very nice titbits thrown into the tale.
There are a couple missing words, a few minor grammatical errors, and I think a name mix-up at the end, but as a whole, this chapter read well.

This was an interesting chapter. I especially enjoyed the various witnesses' attitudes while on the stand; they were perfect for the characters. There are a few typos in this chapter, but it reads well as a whole, and the pacing is very nice. I also liked the character interaction at the end.

For some reason, my wondering is more on Sephiroth than Reno. Maybe because I know Reno will get out of anything life throws at him. I never worry or feel sorry for Tseng. I feel sorry for anyone who crosses him. He didn't keep his post out of pure luck. Thanks for the posting.

wow. writing out an entire court case takes a tremendous amount of skill and time. both of which you have successfully accomplished. so how many episodes of law and order have you watched thus far? ahahaha! just kidding =P still this is a very intriguing story and it's complexity drives it forwards. keep up the great work!

I hope you update this soon. I need more laughs.

Jenova? Jenova’s nothing but a frickin’ head!

lol

I've never played Phoenix Wright either, but this is good. Funny.

LOLage. I was having a bad day until i saw this. Hauling Reno in front of a jury for kidnapping Jenova? Priceless. Can now smile through my hurty jaw. Write more soon, please?

I had the same consisted facial expression when I was reading this, which consisted of an irregular grin with teeth sticking out almost as if they were buck. I only get that when I'm alone and really really obsessive. I hope that's a compliment

I feel so bad for Reno. He may have considerd other things, except for how bad his past will haunt him. I have a feeling that the remants might try to kill Tseng, then the next day, he'll come back again with no harm since he knows how to evade death, it'll scare everyone.

I can't wait to figure out how Riku and Seph will play in this. I'll be waiting.