PURELY BEAUTIFUL! I just can't get enough of Zack and Aerith, they are so cute together, but I tollerate Cloud and Aerith pairings too, since I was once a fan, until my hazel eyes lay upon Zack Fair...Um anyway great job and,
KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!

Awesome job once again!

Its really good. Your a very good poet. I think what you said in the poem was true, Heroes don't die like that. SO TRUE

I love Zack and Aerith...but anyway this was really good I'd give it 9/10.
Keep writing!