Nice very very nice. I liked it all. Only Connor seemed a bit OOC.

Yummy descriptions of Stephen.

Great story!
I love the Stephen/Abby pairing!

I loved the story. Any chance you might add a story carrying on from this one? My favorite couple on the show.

I just discovered this fanfic about Stephen and Abby. It was absolutely FANTASTIC!!
Very well written, and had a nice flow to it. Thanks for a very enjoyable read!

Connor, Connor what were you thinking? Abby is Stephen now, you don't go after her again. I love protive Stephen, it makes him even more hotter. And any nice feelings I had for Helen are gone. I can't believe Nick of all people would forged Lester's signature.

Wow you did what I thought was not impossible, you made me feel sorry for Helen. So Nick and Stephen must keep the future from happening, while not letting anyone know. I wonder how that is going to work.

Wow I really hate Helen. I do hope Abby and the baby are fine. Yay a Stephen/Abby baby. Poor Nick not only is he dealing with Stephen return but now Helen's.

I figured Nick wouldn't take Stephen return all that well. Yeah they both hate Helen. It was her that ruin Stephen/Abby pairing and then she got Stephen killed. I hope Nick and Stephen can work out their issues.

Yay for Stephen/Abby love. I knew that Abby no matter what will always love Stephen. I'm glad Stephen alright.

I smiple love this story so far. I truly believe that Stephan/Abby were ment to be from the moment they meet. Connor/Abby just seems so forced. I would love to know what would happen if Stephan did return and in love with Abby. But what are the chances of that happen on the show? I look foward to reading more.

Oh wow!

This is totally fantastic. You have me so interested, as usual!

Cant wait for more!!

Connor is an ass *glares at Connor and threatens to punch him*

Keep writing!!

Suzi xox

hi,

great chapters. I like the pace you set for the story, not too fast but not to slow either. Of course for me Abby and Stephen could habe been together yesterday^^
I'm curious what's going to happen between those two and how it's going from here. Will Nick come back? Please no Helen^^
Hope you keep updating so fast^^

Hi,

I love your stephen/abby stories!
There aren't nearly enough of them.
Hopefully it won't be too long till they get together. I like how you portray Stephen, even so he shouldn't be too bad boy but I trust you completely to make this a wonderful and great story. I mean there are only 2 chapters yet and I love it already.^^
I like Conner, but as you said in your note, there's no chemistry and for me they made Primeval with this "pairing" a lot less interesting. Killing Stephen on top of it was the biggest mistake they could do, because hello... he and abby are my favorite characters and without Stephen I don't really have a reason to watch it anymore! I could go on how the cliffhanger at the end of 2x7 and the interview with the confirmation that Stephen won't be coming back were just cruel or killing him of because of an affair he had over 8 years ago is just so stupid I can't stop ranting about it, but I think you had enough of my complaining.^^
So I will leave you to writing the next chapter^^

Oh, the suspense is killing me!
Write more soon, please. =)

I agree; Cabby...no, not happening.

Yay! I love it and i totally agree...Abby and Connor would never work, its fine just as flirting but can you imagine Connor actually settling? Lol Good first chapter, please keep writing! xx