Nicely done. This is quite an entertaining little scenario, and you're description and wit is awesome.

Hmm, how come we never see a normal, everyday Light-fics these days? I would love to see more snippets of a somewhat reality and not just Kira-obsession and "I-write-this-fic-'cause-it's-my-fav-pairing!" Its fun, yes of course, but it's getting old now.. hehe, at least for me. XD

Big thumbs up for a diffrent turn in the DN fandom!(and its going on my fav list! yay!)

hehe, am going to sleep now, tearing down some wallpaper tomorrow, wouldn't want to fall asleap on my feet. ;P
//Butters

Your writing is just so good I honestly feel the need to review everything I fave, even though I'm exhausted. Actually your writing helped inspire me to act on an idea I had, thanks haha. I can't think of anything to say to this really, just that I enjoyed it. How boring, something everyone always says. Wish I could think of something better haha

God, you've written so much. I feel like all I've been doing these past two days at work is reading your Death Note stuff. It's rather impressive. It's refreshing to see you write about Light and L, too.

Yasuo Harada. He was in your Mikami fic I just read, as that girl's fiance. You know you've read too much of Saulie's work when you begin to recognize things like that. Sheesh.

Now that I'm thinking of it, I'm not sure I can remember ever reading ANYTHING of yours with Light and L before. I like it. I really, really like it. Because Light's thought process isn't as painfully cryptic as say, Matt's, when you write him, and I actually know what's going on all the time, LOL. (Not that a little confusion or mystery bothers me, I was just making an observation.)

One day you've got to explain to me those random breaks you do when you start a new paragraph in the dead middle of a sentence. I figure it's a random stylistic thing, but if it has a more significant purpose, you've gotta clue me in. I'd hate to think that I'm missing an important cue because I'm too dense to figure it out myself.

Aw. Cute how it ends on a note about Light's mother. Makes Light seem more human, all this getting sick stuff.

Most amusing. My favorite line was "…Several hundred years old, apparently."
You kept L and Light very in character in this. Great job.

This is a combination of angst and crack. And a VERY good one! 'He would bring the world justice (once this headache went away).' That was absolutely wonderful!

Great little oneshot you have here. Had fun reading this fic [Light is really fun to read being sick...even if he isn't having fun himself *grin*]...Loved it!

This is truly the BEST oneshot I've ever read.
And please, trust me, when I say "the best" it isn't a laughing matter.
I'm not someone to grant a "the best" to any fanfic or doujin, for that matter.
I like the loose style of writing.
And the obvious presence of your knowledge and skill in which this fic is partly drenched.
I expect more like this from your hand ^^

I always love your LightL fics and this one is just as brilliant. It's witty and hilarious and just, wow. ^^ Definitely fav!

Hope to see more from you!

That was great! I loved it, especially the end. Great job!

Judi