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| freak show 2008-05-27 ch 16, | abuseThis is actually one of the very few stories that always left me thinking about what was going to happen next, after I read every chapter. I imagined Tobias leaving Rachel for ever, including a speech he was going to say, in the first chapters...I felt their anger and as a plus there was a song in your story ;). And I liked the end, the kiss between them, Rachel as a bear =P ha, that was funny and cool. I can't wait for your next story, hope it's a R/T thing again...you know, my favorite characters, but if you include the others that would be awesome. Anyhow, now it's my turn to have some luck in my finals, I seriously need some vacations...um yeah...ha sorry, I'm desperate. Well, hope to see you soon around here with a new fic! |
| SouthrnBelle 2008-05-23 ch 16, | abuseHA gah...not that I would EVER cheat...but remind me to NEVER cheat on you! :-) Do you realize you've made Rachel have to deal with a complete jackass who screwed with her head and only wanted her for sex, then to have her go home and think that she's become stuck in morph for life...as a BEAR..., then to go to court and pay thousands of dollars to the jackass who screwed her over for getting back at him (for some reason...they never showed that part in Carrie Underwood's video "Before He Cheats"...you know - the part where Carrie goes to jail and pays thousands for completely trashing her ex's car...HA)and after all that, the poor girl goes to JAIL...all this for her punishment. I mean...I'm TOTALLY against cheating...but I really feel for the girl. WOW. (You know I'm just messing with you...I love everything you write) With that said, I have to say...if you have any ideas on the "punishment" that should be given to MY ex-boyfriend for cheating on me - I'm all ears :-) (Unlike Carrie, I didn't have the guts to screw up his car. But I had my own idea that I think might've hurt his "fragile" ego. After finding out about him and ending it, he called me, begging me to forgive him and promised it was a "mistake" (blah blah blah) and ended up asking me to meet up with him to "talk". Well, I showed up. With a complete other guy. (Granted...the guy was a total friend and nothing more...but who was my ex to know that?) So it made me feel a bit better. But heck - if you can find a way to make him go to jail or pay me a couple thousand for "emotional abuse" ;-) just let me know! HA (Maybe a note/suggestion/pleading for the future...can you give poor lil' Rachel a break? Thanks for not killing her like KA...but you kinda put her through the ringer in this one) ;-) BTW - can't wait till your next story |
| freak show 2008-05-19 ch 15, | abuseI knew it!! haha, really, but I actually thought Tobias was kinda sick...you know, making Rachel go through that was...bizarre (that's what I couldn't believe). Anyhow, is really the last chapter? man, I liked this story. Well, keep writing and I'll keep reading =P |
| SouthrnBelle 2008-05-19 ch 15, | abuseWow you really did get me. I was sure you were going to pull the elemist card or something. Go you! Very crafty. I like it...awesome story ;-) BTW...what WAS the title? LOL |
| SouthrnBelle 2008-05-14 ch 14, | abuseTobias is an idiot...hope he's happy now. He's married to a bear. Good job. :-)(But I like what you have so far) |
| freak show 2008-05-13 ch 14, | abuse...Tobias is mad! I can't believe it...please update soon or I'll go crazy like Tobias =P |
| freak show 2008-05-03 ch 13, | abuseMan, you love to leave us on suspense =P I actually felt Tobias' anger...I can't imagine what he's going to ask her... btw, good luck with your finals =) Adios |
| SouthrnBelle 2008-05-03 ch 13, | abuseGah...that broke my heart to read. You really captured both of their emotions extremely well. Except I have no idea what Tobias is planning to do to get "revenge". That doesn't seem like a healthy alternative to me...but who knows what I would do if I ever had my husband cheat on me. Their really going to have to try to work through this if they plan to fix their marriage. Dern...goodluck figuring that out! LOL...I'm just enjoying reading. Update soon, k? |
| freak show 2008-04-30 ch 12, | abuseAh! I can't wait...can you update as soon as you can? please ;) |
| digitalmonster911 2008-04-24 ch 10, | abuseAw, come on. You are so mean to just leave it there! Update real soon and I'll review real soon! |
| freak show 2008-04-23 ch 10, | abusewoah, yeah Rach listen to that song! muahaha sorry I'm mean...I want them to be together though. This is getting better =D |
| SouthrnBelle 2008-04-23 ch 10, | abuseFinally! Can't wait to see what happens next :-) Well, I guess when you cheat - you're either going to get a really painful song written about you...or you can do what Carrie Underwood said and just screw up their car.:-D But I'm thinking this one would hurt Rachel the most...what about you? |
| SouthrnBelle 2008-04-20 ch 8, | abuseSo glad to see another update :-) Can't wait to see what you have next! |
| freak show 2008-04-19 ch 7, | abuseDamn, Rachel is really far away from Tobias...=P By the way, I like that you're taking your time with every chapter and not rushing to the end... Well, update as soon as you can =) Adios |
| SouthrnBelle 2008-04-17 ch 7, | abuseLOVE the update! I just wish I knew what their convo was about...LOL - I speak FRENCH...and it's been a LONG time since I've been to France and had to use it so even THAT is shaky, haha. Loving every bit so keep writing! |