ok one thing im having a problem with . your not saying who's talking . and im sorry to say its getting rather confusing .. like someone will cut in but you wont know whos talking or who was talking in the first place . so please tell us who is talking like this“Don’t Hayden im guessing its adam“I didn’t ask you i think it might be hayden“But… i have no clue“Adam what’s going on?“Her names Peyton.“What was that? what
see you need to elaborate more tell us whos talking are they yelling it .. whispering it . commanding it .

i love it

very good job

you know what would make this better and more ironic. If cole made an appearence. I'm not saying it has to be Cole/Phobe but I would love that.

nice story]

I loved your story. You really need to update it real soon. I want to know what Adam's reaction would be when he finds out PJ is pregnant.

UGH! why didnt she tell him! plz update soon!

cool story can't wiat for the next chap.

I love this story, lol, Please Update!

so will the original power of 3 still have powers, just not the power of three or are you making it so they lose the powers they possess all together? good job

very good job

plz update! this is so good!

I lova this story!its very well written and keeps the reader interested. job well done!

very good job

very good start...I hope she heeds her mother's warning