Very nice, I pictured everything :D, thanks!

What a revealing look into the Winchester's younger years from an outsider's view! John Winchester makes the coach look like a hissing kitten in comparison.
This was brilliantly done! I like that the coach felt a little more empathetic towards Sam in the end once he realized he wasn't quite the pampered prince he assumed. Very nicely done.)

Such an interesting perspective, and so well-written. Excellent work!)

great story

Exellent. I love the way you portray the Winchesters. It's damn near impossible to find any Outside-POVS but I think it's important that some be written...

well done- this was really good. I loved the gradual shift in his opinion of Sam which ended with him kinda maybe believe bit wanting to look out for him. but just professionally, of course, cause he'd never actually care about a kid... *shifty eyes
lol, great work.)

This was SOO worth blowing off my summer homework. I loved your dean, and coach grant was funny. He seems more like a football coach to me though. The progression was wonderful, and not too short. poor Sammy though, push ups with a cast? I can barely do one with two functional arms. gotta love John

SAMMY!
That was a really neat story just because of the POV. It was awesome to watch the coach grow. This story really explains how there are so many other stories about Sam and social services. Good job. Loved it.

wow this is AWESOME. so in character, it's just awesome!

This fanfiction was just completely wonderful. Hard to make a story any better
Thanks!

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. I find fics about outsiders looking in at the Winchester family pretty cool and you did a very good job at it. :D

This was great, it was wonderful to read it from someone else's POV for a change. I love it.

Good story: it gave an interesting perspective on the Winchesters, and was definitely a different way of laooking at it. Well worth reading.

Very nicely done. I enjoyed reading from the outsider's point of view.)

Oh, I like! I LOVE outsider POV on the Winchesters! It's great to see how their normal lives are very un-normal to everyone else. Thanks for writing such nice story for us to enjoy _