Good story: it gave an interesting perspective on the Winchesters, and was definitely a different way of laooking at it. Well worth reading.

Very nicely done. I enjoyed reading from the outsider's point of view. :)

Oh, I like! I LOVE outsider POV on the Winchesters! It's great to see how their normal lives are very un-normal to everyone else. Thanks for writing such nice story for us to enjoy ^_^

That was great.

It has to be weird for an outsider to look at the Winchesters. I'm surprised he didn't think to report John based on what he saw, but he couldn't have known that a broken wrist wasn't anything to freak out about in a family of hunters.

Anyway, good job. :)

Totally awesome story! Loved it! :)

I like this, you did a good job with the characters. thanks for the story

This was GREAT!
I could totally see the boys in a house like that, and it all seems very masculine and huntery (is that a word?)
Definitely suits them, and i can SEE the place perfectly, it all just fits, it's just great.

I can never get enough of outsider POV stories, so I was happy when I found this one. This was awesome one-shot, quite different than others I have read.

So, Great Job!

What can I say... this story made my day!
You give a window in to part of the WeeChesters life that isn't usually seen, and you did it with skill and well used words.
Thanks for writing and sharing!
:)

To summarize my reaction in two words: Mind Blowing.

This is awesome! First of all, we have an outsiders point of view. Always a plus. Second, the outsider doesn't automatically like Sam - very different than most outsider pov's. It's refreshing.

Also - I love the fact that you balanced out Johns reactions in such a way that - looking through the ousider's eyes - he could look like a tyrant, and yet not going overboard and making it a "John abused his children" story. That's extra refreshing.

This is definately going on my favorites list, and if it were a book, it's pages would be guarenteed to be worn and freyed by the end of next year. Thanks for posting!

Really good. Nicely done!! Love the outsider's POV here.

Loved it! that was really cool!

Man, this was such a refreshing read! I added it to my favorites which goes to show how much I enjoyed it. I love the way Coach Grant kind of goes out of his way to convince himself he doesn't care. And I did like that you didn't make John a complete tyrant. I really detest authors who portray him that way because I don't believe he was even remote like that. He wasn't outright cruel. Just a little stern. Anyway, I think you did a good job with this. Keep it up!

Wow, this was really good. You rounded all of the characters out so well. I liked how vague everything was: the incident, the hunt. Keep up the good work. ^^

THat was awesome! A refreshing take on the outsider's/teacher's perspective kind of fic!