great story. I really like it. keep up the good work!

Whoa! you are such a good writer i really wanna read the bad ending and the good ending! But before that i'm going to read the sequel and that will probably be awesome too!
cya x

ok... ya lost me.

well. hol-e. sh*t.
That's makin me almost cry. Hol-e sh*t. wow.

Wow, i'm on the edge of my seat! I'm def reading the sequel as soon as i can. Oh and can i be included in the sequel? I don't really mind what you put me as, heck you can even choose my name between Mikki or Glitz or Glittereyes etc. etc. Oh and Renzo is evil? WTH!? That was a shocker.

Aw... just like our friendship Lilyara! -hug- This was the best chapter. Ima have to make an account soon!

Whoa Whoa Whoa... Renzo? >.> Oh... you gotta be kidding me. HE IS EVIL?!?!!?!?!?!?!?!?! Major plot hole there Chiharu-Chan. This is really crule you know. Pistachio reminds me a pit of Tart. O.O

Tasumi! You better kick ass! I'ma read the sequel!

NO NO NO HELL NO! Rhiannon you bitch! I thought you were on the good side! And fuck you too Jace! Oh no... Tyoko Mew Mew! You can't die out! Why did you do this Chiharu-Chan! T-T I am about three seconds away from jumping inside your fic and beating Jace and Rhianno's ass. You are two sadistic Bitches that should be killed! TO HELL WITH YOU TWO!

Nice Chapter Chiharu-Chan! Poor Masami. You can't help but wonder, how bad is Masami's life gonna get?

:Hugs Masami:

Oh! I'm litterly on the edge of my seat waiting for the sequel! So amazing! Keep writing! I wanna know more!

GRR! DIE! I WANNA BE AN ALIEN!

Name: Suki Misa
Appearance" Shoulder lanked purple hair, and I wear an outfit similar to Pai's only a dark purple. My hair is held in 2 short braids.
Weapon: Gemini Swords. (2 dagger like swords. One is blue, One is red)
Attack: Gemini Twin Strike
Other: I am Pai's little sister and have a HUGE crush on Kish.

YOU BETTER MAKE THAT SEQUEL SOON! AND KILL JACE AND RHIANNAN! OH AND KILL ARTIMAS! THERE CAN ONLY BE 1 QUEEN OF THE UNDERWOLD AND THAT IS ME!

Mika-chan

It's over...huh...well, anyways, there's a sequel!! Yay!! Write it soon!! Hope you get your nine reviews!!

And...HOLY, Renzo is evil?!! Never saw that coming...

Dude. Artimas creeps me out. (shudder) And poor Tasumi...well, thanks for telling me what Lolita means (laughs) I never knew what it meant until now...

~Aya

Y-Y-You...


I can't belive this...

RENZO IS EVIL! NO! MY POOR RENZO-KUN! WHY! CHIHARU-CHAN!

Its not fair ='( And Tasumi is a Mew!

DAMNIT! CHIHARU-SAN, YOU MAKE ME MAD!

QWhy do you have such great endings!?!? THIS STORY IS FAB-U-LOS!
I can't wait for the rest!
And do you think i can come in? I don't really care where or how.. heck i don't really care if i don't, I JUST WANNA MEET THE PLAYBOY EATSER BUNNY! And Ryou n.n

Anyway later from your biggest fan.

Toffee

*sniffle* I'm so close to crying right now. That was truely the most dramatic chapter I have ever read. Incredible. Simply incredible.

WHAT THE HELL?! THIS IS AN INSANE WAY TO END IT! MASAMI SHOULD LIVE! DAMN THAT BITCH RHIANNON! SHE SHOULD GO DIE! Wait she is dead. SHE SHOULD BE REVIVED JUST SO SHE COULD DIE AGAIN! UPDATE SOON!

Mika-chan