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| seaoftrouble 2008-04-15 ch 6,  | abuseI was excited to see you wrote another NCIS discipline fic, you always write them so well. This one was no exception. I loved Tony making his own paddle and the father/son relationship between the two was very well done and in character. Great job! |
| PaperHat 2008-04-15 ch 6, | abuseOuch! Another great story! Tip for Tony - burn the desk instead! Loved this fic Sasha, worth waiting for! |
| PaperHat 2008-04-15 ch 5, | abuseOh, bad boy Gibbs! I loved the West Wing reference. This is one of the classic scenes in the show and your use of it from Tony's perspective was briliant. I take it before I read the last chapter that there is no prospect of a paddle eating monster appearing in the basement and gobbling up Tony's first 'project'? |
| PaperHat 2008-04-15 ch 4, | abuseI could totally see Tony's POV and then as usual you point out where the boy done wrong. "Damn thing bit me" Priceless. |
| PaperHat 2008-04-15 ch 3, | abuseEk, wasn't expecting that! Oh no, Tony is in big trouble. |
| PaperHat 2008-04-15 ch 2, | abuseOh dear sensing impending doom for Tony. Best line, "Touch anything else, and I’ll hand-cuff you" Excellent |
| PaperHat 2008-04-15 ch 1, | abuseI can see the point, would love to drive a 'baby' tank. Mean Gibbs not letting him have a go! |
| special agent Ali 2008-04-13 ch 6, | abuseaw I love your stories you never overdo their punishment (believe me some people do hundreds I'm like damn) but your a genius and the love between Tony and Gibbs is incredible. I thought Tony would be a sobbing mess too but good old Gibbs he's such a softy really I loved this I really really loved this Ali |
| Sophia2003 2008-04-13 ch 6, | abuseWow...that was a fabulous bit of writing there! This story has just become my new fave -- it's just so well put together and I so LOVE the dynamic you've built. I'll echo another comment too...will there be more like this? I'd certainly like to see more of this Gibbs and Tony world. Sophia |
| supergirl3684 2008-04-13 ch 6, | abuseLOVED it hun!! that was great! I can't wait to see what kind of trouble tony gets himself into next! |
| supergirl3684 2008-04-13 ch 5, | abuseoh yeah, I can so see gibbs as a stubborn kid!! and taking apart the locks on the doors...can see that too!! that was great! |
| DaasE 2008-04-13 ch 6, | abuse8] Nice wrapping up of the climax you did there. |
| Celena Caine 2008-04-13 ch 6, | abuseGreat story liked that you brought up the point the actual punishment was making it. |
| poohbear123 2008-04-13 ch 6, | abusegreat one thank that paddle will get lots of use |
| affleckfan08 2008-04-13 ch 6, | abuseoh no...kept in his desk drawer...i have a feeling it will make a reappearance! |