Wow, that was really, really good! Your descriptions of Cloud and Aerith are just spot-on, and you have excellent imagery in your story. The ending is priceless, too. You're a great writer--keep it up! :D

Really, I don't know what to say about this, it's so perfect! The way you described Cloud is beautiful! Makes me wish he was real! I love your writing!
Sweet story, so full of emotion... You talented person! :D

Beautifully written, in a way that it would leave you feeling a lot of emotions at the same time. It was wonderful. :)

My gawd, he is just beautifully broken... this was just beautiful!! Omg... I loved it!

this is truly beautiful writing. Fantastic description of Cloud, and i envy your writing style. You are extremely talented, and have shown this pairing brilliantly.

Hm... to me, it's a little long, but then again such pieces are difficult to write; so much emotion in both characters, so much stuff to try and make clear... you can't do it in a few quick lines. I admire you for writing something like this :) And, it's insanely cute; like most well-written CxA fics tend to be. Well done! I understand what you wanted to say with this; but maybe others won't have much patience. Ah, what dyou know, fans these days ask only for crack!fics full of sex and strange pairings; it's nice to see good, solid canon pairings like here still persisting in their cuteness. :)
Nice work!