I was so happy to find a sequel to Requiem! You do wonderfully here! Your characters are so well developed and it's interesting to see how Jazz reacts to things going on around him (especially Prowl). Excellent Excellent story! I love this pairing; they are too perfect for each other. Any chance of seeing the next chapter soon?

I have now officially read through this fic three separate times. You are duty-bound to continue it, or I shall go mad. Because I will keep coming back. You, alone amongst the multitude of amaeteurish offerings on this site, are making me Heart Jazz/Prowl.

Well, there IS a sequel! So good, just as nice as Requiem, I love the Jazz/Prowl dynamic that you've got going.

Keep up the good work!

i love how each of your Transformers: Juxtaposition stories add to the overall feel of this universe you created along with the way you developed the characters to interact in it. This one in particular is exceptionally well written and captivation.

An interesting view of how Jazz and Prowl met =) I love it.

wonderfully heartfelt, hope you'll continue this. you're my fave author on the site ya know!

again, a beautiful work.

your subtlety is most admirable, and I hope you wouldn't mind if I added this to my alerts so that when you update (as I hope you will do swiftly!) I can be here in a flash.

Looking forwards to more!

Your story is utterly fascinating as well as very touching. I hope you are able to finish it! :)

This is really an amazing piece of work. You've managed to convey your points without killing them with melodrama or the like. You've done an amazing job of showing instead of telling. ^^ Sorry if I'm overdoing it. I've just really enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing it with us.

Lovely to read this. Will review again when I get to the end, but I had to compliment you on a sentence that jumped out at me:

"Between them, they managed to lift the too-light frame back atop the table."

Seems like a silly, nitpicky thing to be impresed by, especially considering the generally excellent quality here, but the use of a phrase that's often meant to imply neglect or starvation--too-light--really drives home his state. And it's accurate! Just caught my attention and thought you'd like to know that.

On to the rest!

poor jazz, but i know he'll get through it. and once prowl lets go of that tension, i think he'll know exactly what to do.

Can't wait for the next chapter, this is really good.

Interesting... I have no idea the significance of that not being how he remembers it. Maybe I should re-read the first couple of chapters.

This story contiues to amaze me. Everything is just so perfectly balance and well written, and things that you brought up in the first chapter just come around full circle so naturally. I can't wait to see how you end this, because this is by far the best story I've ever read.

now im confuzzled out of my mind plz uupdate so my logic center does not die!! ;)