great chapters, i loved them. keep on going!

Good luck! (: Love your writing. Talent! ^.^

wow~~very beautifully written~! beautiful language~! keep up the good work~!

nya, this part of the arc made me soo sad T^T and the detail that you put into it actually made me cry TT^TT -sniffle- it was great though, update when you can! keep it up nya~!
~Lonely Kitty

Very emotional drabble but I love it.. You just fill in all the empty parts of the story where than anime and manga did not show.. Hope you will update soon k!! =)

aww,.,. :)
definitely sweet and nice! :D
hahahaha
Lenalee likes hugging Allen! ;)
more please! ;D

Again, I don't know anything about this series - you pointed me to a site last time but I couldn't make head nor tail of it - is this a web-published-only video series? - but it made for a nice warm read.

I can't help but map Lenalee into a certain Miss Granger and Allen into a certain Boy Who Lived and you had me worried with what I thought was turning out to be too 'motherly' a tone to the girl's relationship with the boy but I then read that you were ahead of me:

"She was probably too young to be having maternal instincts, but she couldn't help but worry about him."

Just like another girl/boy couple we know :-)

Enjoyed the little cupboard scene. There's something very ... comfy ... in the thought of two such innocents/friends thus caught. With we readers knowing that the two are noble characters above any hanky-panky. Not a bad way to have one or the both of them start thinking outside that "just a friend" box though :-)

Aww...not too much fluff, but cute! Nice work. Update soon!

:-(
so where's the rest of it? it was going so well... im really liking ur writing style.. its not too fluff and flowery, but its not preschool-ish... ur descriptions are great... i really felt like i was in the closet with them at that moment

Fluff! But I like it..

Another great drabble!! Simply love the ending!! Allen and Lenalee are just so kawaii!! =)

Hahaha, I love reading this chapter becasuse it's so much fun! I love the feel of this chapetr because I'm just easily cruising around and it's very light and pleasant to read. So in all, good job :)

You rock out loud ;D

I love these fics! Update soon?

Beautiful ;-;

Hahah, these stores are really cute!! I hope the other 28 will be like them! Continue continue~!