 tfobmv18 9/2/08 . chapter 10I like it. Can't wait to see what'll happen next. Why didn't they take X-23 from the lab as well? Keep up the good work. |
 moonfan2012 7/17/08 . chapter 10good story so far would love to read more! |
 Rogue181 5/30/08 . chapter 10Can't wait for the kid's torture, um, I mean danger room session!-D Update soon! |
 Geminia 5/28/08 . chapter 1Interesting. However,"He spotted the girl. She was staring down at her knuckles, it was then that she screamed in pain as three bone claws erupted from her knuckles, blood oozing out as her skin ripped apart.
The girl fell to the floor on her knees staring at her hands howling in pain.
doesn't Rogue only absorb mutations? The claws are not part of Wolverine's mutation, so shouldn't she only get his animal senses and healing powers? However, I have not read any comics and only know what I have seen on the TV show when I was younger and wiki So feel free to correct me!
Gemini |
 mangadreams 5/27/08 . chapter 10great chapter:) |
 Sarahtherogue 5/27/08 . chapter 1Who knows Jubilee might end up with some tweeny romance of her own).
Just needed some of the characters to be younger. Be a bit unbelievable if they were all over the age of 16!
Thanks for all the reviews, they make my day!
I'm going to work on the next chapter tonight...
x sarah |
 Crack4sure 5/26/08 . chapter 10i just wished jubes was older. Having her be twelve and crushing on Remy just isn't the same as if she was 16. |
 pennylane87 5/26/08 . chapter 10keeping this not totally a romy is a great idea, it's nice to see jubilee's crush and the young mutants feelings... even so, i enjoy the flirt between rogue and remy and I'm pretty sure you're going to bring them together, are you? lol, please! Nice done) |
 The Duplicitous One 5/26/08 . chapter 10Ok. You're kiling me with Remy's whisperering. Come on! Say it out loud already! You're going in the right direction by not making it all ROMY. I just hope they get together sonn!
REMY ROMY FOREVER! |
 gambitfan85 5/26/08 . chapter 10Enjoyed the chapter very much. Didn't see much wrong with what you wrote this far. Everything seems pretty solid. Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great work. |
 Crack4sure 5/22/08 . chapter 9ohh im sure that'll throw a wrench in rogue and remy's realtionship! |
 pennylane87 5/22/08 . chapter 9It was a nice chapter, I like kitty so much and always enjoy converstaions between those two. Still I hope more romy fluff coming soon... and eric szamanda? OMG I totally love him! that was the best detail of the entire chapter, lol. Anyway good work) |
 gambitfan85 5/22/08 . chapter 9I thought it was a good chapter, but not enough ROMY moments. More Rogue helping out Kitty and Kurt. But that's okay since I still enjoy everyone interactions together. I hope the next chapter is filled with Romy goodness. I can't wait to see X-23 again. Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work. |
 The Duplicitous One 5/22/08 . chapter 9Where was the ROMY fluff? All we got was the Kitty/Rogue conversation, the Rogue/Kurt conversation some silly kids gossiping. Hope your next chapter is ROMY centered.
REMY ROMY FOREVER! |
 mangadreams 5/22/08 . chapter 9Really great chapter. jubilee is pretty immature love it can hardly wait to see what happens next:) |