 ShineX 2009-11-07 . chapter 10Too bad,this had a lot of potential, but you, just like so many others with stories like these, just blew it off. Oh well, good while it lasted |
 ShineX 2009-11-07 . chapter 8cool |
 ShineX 2009-11-07 . chapter 6Nicely done |
 ShineX 2009-11-07 . chapter 4Nice way to intergrate that, lol |
 ShineX 2009-11-07 . chapter 2again, good chapter, though I do hope you put Ryoga in there |
 ShineX 2009-11-07 . chapter 1Awesome start, had potential |
 Narsil 2009-01-24 . chapter 10Just finished the full published story (along with the annual), and it's really too bad that it's dead, it had a lot of potential. The various Ranma 1/2 cast fit into the DC setting better than I expected. It'd be cool if some talented writer (not me by a long shot) got permission to continue this. |
 Minnesota Supremacist 2008-11-21 . chapter 10What I would like to see... is ranma vs catwoman. I can totally see him mincing her while in the neko-ken |
 Tombadgerlock 2008-09-08 . chapter 10no.
Abandonned, but very good :-) |
 Tuisto 2007-12-15 . chapter 10Very good story, I'd love to read more.
Only complaint I have is a format error where quotes and other vital punctuation is missing. |
 Skunkboy 2007-11-16 . chapter 10Very nice. I hope you keep writing. It'd be a shame to see this story die like so many others. |
 MattCauthon1 2007-10-06 . chapter 10Any chance on an update? |
 JWG 2007-08-19 . chapter 1Ah well, almost two years since the last update. I guess this one's dead. A real shame too, since it was the spark that inspired A Spider in Nerima. Was thinking you were moving toward making the bracelet the source of Ranma's increasingly feminine behavior. The Amazon do want Women Warriors after all. Hope I'll get to find out one of these days.
If you're still out there and thinking about continuing, I have to echo Baron Hausenpheffer's earlier review. The grammar needs a major upgrade. Just read it outloud to yourself before you post it. That will help you catch a lot of the gaffs. A well polished piece is so much easier to read.
Write Something everyday!
-JW |
 Vampwriter 2007-07-24 . chapter 10Please come back this. I really like it. I want to see Ranma/Ranko kick the Black Rose's ** some more. And I have no doubt that they're in for a hell of a lot more weirdness to come. And I have the strange feeling that there's more going on with Ranma and that strange bracelet than meets the eye. |
 Calen 2007-06-20 . chapter 4No! Why?! Aw man... I was hoping you'd keep in more Batman than Ranma in the plot and characters. That should have been Stephanie Brown! *sigh* But I am liking this even with a Tendo as Spoiler *sigh*... |