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ShineX
2009-11-07 . chapter 10
Too bad,this had a lot of potential, but you, just like so many others with stories like these, just blew it off. Oh well, good while it lasted
ShineX
2009-11-07 . chapter 8
cool
ShineX
2009-11-07 . chapter 6
Nicely done
ShineX
2009-11-07 . chapter 4
Nice way to intergrate that, lol
ShineX
2009-11-07 . chapter 2
again, good chapter, though I do hope you put Ryoga in there
ShineX
2009-11-07 . chapter 1
Awesome start, had potential
Narsil
2009-01-24 . chapter 10
Just finished the full published story (along with the annual), and it's really too bad that it's dead, it had a lot of potential. The various Ranma 1/2 cast fit into the DC setting better than I expected. It'd be cool if some talented writer (not me by a long shot) got permission to continue this.
Minnesota Supremacist
2008-11-21 . chapter 10
What I would like to see... is ranma vs catwoman. I can totally see him mincing her while in the neko-ken
Tombadgerlock
2008-09-08 . chapter 10
no.

Abandonned, but very good :-)
Tuisto
2007-12-15 . chapter 10
Very good story, I'd love to read more.
Only complaint I have is a format error where quotes and other vital punctuation is missing.
Skunkboy
2007-11-16 . chapter 10
Very nice. I hope you keep writing. It'd be a shame to see this story die like so many others.
MattCauthon1
2007-10-06 . chapter 10
Any chance on an update?
JWG
2007-08-19 . chapter 1
Ah well, almost two years since the last update. I guess this one's dead. A real shame too, since it was the spark that inspired A Spider in Nerima. Was thinking you were moving toward making the bracelet the source of Ranma's increasingly feminine behavior. The Amazon do want Women Warriors after all. Hope I'll get to find out one of these days.

If you're still out there and thinking about continuing, I have to echo Baron Hausenpheffer's earlier review. The grammar needs a major upgrade. Just read it outloud to yourself before you post it. That will help you catch a lot of the gaffs. A well polished piece is so much easier to read.

Write Something everyday!

-JW
Vampwriter
2007-07-24 . chapter 10
Please come back this. I really like it. I want to see Ranma/Ranko kick the Black Rose's ** some more. And I have no doubt that they're in for a hell of a lot more weirdness to come. And I have the strange feeling that there's more going on with Ranma and that strange bracelet than meets the eye.
Calen
2007-06-20 . chapter 4
No! Why?! Aw man... I was hoping you'd keep in more Batman than Ranma in the plot and characters. That should have been Stephanie Brown! *sigh* But I am liking this even with a Tendo as Spoiler *sigh*...
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