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| Tuisto 2007-12-15 ch 10, | abuseVery good story, I'd love to read more. Only complaint I have is a format error where quotes and other vital punctuation is missing. |
| Skunkboy 2007-11-16 ch 10, | abuseVery nice. I hope you keep writing. It'd be a shame to see this story die like so many others. |
| MattCauthon1 2007-10-06 ch 10, | abuseAny chance on an update? |
| JWG 2007-08-19 ch 1, | abuseAh well, almost two years since the last update. I guess this one's dead. A real shame too, since it was the spark that inspired A Spider in Nerima. Was thinking you were moving toward making the bracelet the source of Ranma's increasingly feminine behavior. The Amazon do want Women Warriors after all. Hope I'll get to find out one of these days. If you're still out there and thinking about continuing, I have to echo Baron Hausenpheffer's earlier review. The grammar needs a major upgrade. Just read it outloud to yourself before you post it. That will help you catch a lot of the gaffs. A well polished piece is so much easier to read. Write Something everyday! -JW |
| Vampwriter 2007-07-24 ch 10, | abusePlease come back this. I really like it. I want to see Ranma/Ranko kick the Black Rose's ** some more. And I have no doubt that they're in for a hell of a lot more weirdness to come. And I have the strange feeling that there's more going on with Ranma and that strange bracelet than meets the eye. |
| Calen 2007-06-20 ch 4, | abuseNo! Why?! Aw man... I was hoping you'd keep in more Batman than Ranma in the plot and characters. That should have been Stephanie Brown! *sigh* But I am liking this even with a Tendo as Spoiler *sigh*... |
| Adeptis 2007-04-05 ch 10, | abuseGood story |
| kirallie 2007-01-27 ch 10, | abuseGood work! Keep it up! |
| Jade 2006-12-02 ch 10, anon. | abuseI really liked this story alot though the parts seemed short it was still a very well thought out story though I would like more of it to come out with part 11 soon. |
| I am the Bane of my Sword 2006-10-03 ch 10, | abuseWell... this is good. |
| Ellen Kuhfeld 2006-04-26 ch 10, | abuseReally good job of mixing the two canons. I think you need to change things a bit, to take care of later plot developments. Back on Themiscyra, Ranma was muttering and grumbling about makeup. By this chapter, S/he's taken second place in the Amazon makeup contest, and is doing herself and all the Tendo girls. It's an obvious good idea, but needs some retconning. Ellen |
| Rignach 2006-04-24 ch 10, | abuseWas rereading it and can barely wait for more but damm must you really do another Akane Ranma matchup... really Ranma should see them more as sister afterall they are. So hopefull absolutley no romatic matchup between Ranma and a Tendo Sister. There should be enough other women out there if the story needs a a romantic couple but of course it is your story and you can do whatever you want and I going to continue to read if even going sadly to be another dammed Akane gets Ranma match because it is a grand story. |
| Matrias 2006-03-18 ch 10, | abuseEagerly awaiting more. |
| leeyiankun 2006-02-23 ch 10, | abuseEither that Ranma is becoming a girl, or He's getting Akane as a girlfriend. Oh well, I'll just put this in the Ranma + Akane folder, until things are certain just to be safe.(I index fics by matchups, actually a lot more pleasent once you know what to expect from a folder. :D) Keep going, though I morn the fact that no one actually gets a chance to make a pass at Ranma before Akane.(As always) But yours still a good read. |
| Ardonius-Servant-Of-Zeta 2006-01-08 ch 4, | abuseYou seem to love keeping Ranma in his female form...I know he gets stuck in it from tiem tot ime,b ut I believe your taking it to far, but thats just my opinion. |