More awesomeness. And very sweet family dynamics. Wonderful job.

Wasn't this the story where Peter told Nathan the Petrellis only do boys and didn't seem to understand what he'd said? :D Too many shippers out there, I guess.

Hiya.. I just came across your fanfic a while back and I have not been able to do anything else till I finished it..I wanted to congratulate you for writing such an exellent fic.. You really nailed all the characters and made it so beautiful and real. My favourite part was nathan holding peter as a baby..truely heart warming (= that was a fantastic fic and I hope you write more! Congrats (=

I really, really enjoyed this story.

It came across as very thoughtful. I just love speculation as to what Peter's and Nathan's relationship has been like in the past.

They seem to have had this great bond and, even with the events of A Clear And Present Danger, the love and concern is still there. It's just a great relationship and your take on it was very interesting.

Great Fic!

I read your auther notes at the end, It always makes a story better when the author has done research like that! well done, impressive!

A very believable take on Petrelli backstory, with all its tensions and complications. Kudos!

Bravo! The last chapter (before the ep)has to be my favorite. Peter's birth was wonderful and I love the way you write Charles. We so share a writing style and you know how much I love research too. It really paid off in the story and I am very critical of fan fiction. Congrats, this feels like real and entertaining story.

Great Story. You really nailed the Petrellis, especially Peter, and your writing is flawless. Please . . keep on writing!

Lovely chapter, especially the Peter and Charles part.

Oh, you finished it... I think you chose a perfect ending, and it really brings a nice conclusion to it all, like an introduction or the series. And I love it how your ending is actually a beginning.

I did notice all the facts and details and they did a good job placing it into the right context. Great story, all the way to the end. Hope you have more.

I loved the Deveaux part, along with their interaction and it was straight from the show, so to say. We got so little of Peter in his normal life before he decided to leap off that building. And I really missed that side of him, thank you!
The other part was equally enjoyable and the image of infant Peter was also endearing, kind of reminded me of a photo of Milo Ventimiglia around that age, along with the crooked lip and everything... But again, very nice, very real, and something I would like see on screen.

This is AMAZING! Totally is in my TOP 5 fics! ^_^ True to life, light and touching, and so well thought... Thanks a million for the story.

Wonderful chapter! I like how you showed that vulnerable side of Angela that we saw in the first half of S1, and S2 as well. And the way Peter wants to help her, but she's built those walls and barriers between in order to be strong. She's kind of a tragic figure, to me.
I loved the other part as well. I always wanted to see young Nathan and little Peter and it worked really well. I can totally see Peter coming to Nathan instead of his dad for comfort and affection.
Thank you for this, and if I remember correctly, you said something about chapter 6? Looking forward to it :)

You really set Nathan and Peter's relationship very well. Nice chapter again.

I feel so badly for Nathan at the moment - a crisis in your life is hard enough without having your parents against you and Nathan isn't used to not being the Golden Child so his father's anger would have been doubly painful for him. I liked the subtle touches, which displayed their characters and relations to each other: Author Petrelli offering to buy Peter a new cat right after the old one died, Nathan's manipulations of Peter and the off-kilter give-take relationship they have as adults. It was all very good and I'm eagerly looking forward to the next part :-)

Awsome story so far. I can't wait to read more.

-FT