Reviews for Fathers and Sons

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medlilove 2008-05-06 ch 7,	abuseI read your auther notes at the end, It always makes a story better when the author has done research like that! well done, impressive!
Selena 2008-04-20 ch 7,	abuseA very believable take on Petrelli backstory, with all its tensions and complications. Kudos!
ThePandoraRose 2008-04-19 ch 7,	abuseBravo! The last chapter (before the ep)has to be my favorite. Peter's birth was wonderful and I love the way you write Charles. We so share a writing style and you know how much I love research too. It really paid off in the story and I am very critical of fan fiction. Congrats, this feels like real and entertaining story.
Booradley17 2008-04-19 ch 7,	abuseGreat Story. You really nailed the Petrellis, especially Peter, and your writing is flawless. Please . . keep on writing!
by7the7sea 2008-04-19 ch 6,	abuseLovely chapter, especially the Peter and Charles part.
Graver 2008-04-19 ch 7,	abuseOh, you finished it... I think you chose a perfect ending, and it really brings a nice conclusion to it all, like an introduction or the series. And I love it how your ending is actually a beginning. I did notice all the facts and details and they did a good job placing it into the right context. Great story, all the way to the end. Hope you have more.
Graver 2008-04-19 ch 6,	abuseI loved the Deveaux part, along with their interaction and it was straight from the show, so to say. We got so little of Peter in his normal life before he decided to leap off that building. And I really missed that side of him, thank you! The other part was equally enjoyable and the image of infant Peter was also endearing, kind of reminded me of a photo of Milo Ventimiglia around that age, along with the crooked lip and everything... But again, very nice, very real, and something I would like see on screen.
Dreamer 2008-04-19 ch 7, anon.	abuseThis is AMAZING! Totally is in my TOP 5 fics! ^_^ True to life, light and touching, and so well thought... Thanks a million for the story.
Graver 2008-04-16 ch 5,	abuseWonderful chapter! I like how you showed that vulnerable side of Angela that we saw in the first half of S1, and S2 as well. And the way Peter wants to help her, but she's built those walls and barriers between in order to be strong. She's kind of a tragic figure, to me. I loved the other part as well. I always wanted to see young Nathan and little Peter and it worked really well. I can totally see Peter coming to Nathan instead of his dad for comfort and affection. Thank you for this, and if I remember correctly, you said something about chapter 6? Looking forward to it :)
ThePandoraRose 2008-04-15 ch 5,	abuseYou really set Nathan and Peter's relationship very well. Nice chapter again.
Polly 2008-04-14 ch 4,	abuseI feel so badly for Nathan at the moment - a crisis in your life is hard enough without having your parents against you and Nathan isn't used to not being the Golden Child so his father's anger would have been doubly painful for him. I liked the subtle touches, which displayed their characters and relations to each other: Author Petrelli offering to buy Peter a new cat right after the old one died, Nathan's manipulations of Peter and the off-kilter give-take relationship they have as adults. It was all very good and I'm eagerly looking forward to the next part :-)
Flaming Telepaths 2008-04-13 ch 4,	abuseAwsome story so far. I can't wait to read more. -FT
LUCKY 2008-04-13 ch 4, anon.	abuseyeah, that's a wonderful time to tell nathan about the suicide attempts... she always says things at the worst times. YAY FOR THE STORY!!
Polly 2008-04-13 ch 3,	abuseSo I loved this chapter. Peter's lonliness at the funeral was heart-wrenching and his confusion at his brother's silent treatment was very well portrayed. I feel sorry for Nathan, in a way, having to carry the burden of the guilt of his father's suicide alone, but I'm extremely glad he apologised to Peter and gave him the damned hug he should have given him in the episode :-) ! I think it was interesting to have Nathan stand in for his parents at Peter's school. I always imagined he would have to have done that at some point (probably more often than not as Peter got older) during Peter's childhood. Anyway, this was a very well written chapter and it's developing the brothers' relationship very believably. Can't wait for more!
ThePandoraRose 2008-04-11 ch 1,	abuseU know how much I adore this story. Keep up the good work.

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